FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ExciteDike]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad. I don't see excitebike sprites on NG much, so this was neat. Good animations too with the sprites. Good quality music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting much more. You had a creative title for this, but it was just a guy who landed on his head then slid along. You definitely needed some sound effects in this, like a skidding effect towards the end would be obvious. You really need to have some more storyline in your next movie. This looks more like practice!

Nimii responds:

Well I appreciate the upbeat tone of your message. Thanks for taking the time to review the Flash. Yeah, I wouldn't say more practice... More time would be a little better. However, always improving. Always. The sound effects are probably going to be added to the final version which I will put on here as well. Adding the sound effects is the easy part anyway.

[LL-Audition]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were the best part about this movie. There was a lot of shading, also some good animations in this. Some of this was pretty funny. I liked the discussion with Digital lock, which had to be the best part about this. Nice length for what came out of this too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not really satisfied with where this started or ended. You didn't really have a storyline in this. What was she auditioning for?

danishcoffe responds:

Clocky was to the auditioning.

Thank you!

[The cat's pajamas ep. 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a terrible try at a first animutation movie. You had lots of flashing lights an lots of different images that were kind of funny. Quick, funny animations as well. Decent music too, though it could be better.

^^Needs Improving^^
I said the music was ok, but really it could have been a lot more exciting and have some lyrics, which all animutation movies should have in my opinion. Also, this could use some more image manipulation too, and animations other than rotations.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

do you review everything?

[Drunken and Rena: TSM]

K

^^Good Points^^
A collab dedicated to thesoulman. An interesting idea, and it turned out pretty decent. I liked the first part best, since it had a storyline with him shooting blams at crappy movies, which is pretty funny. The second part was cool since it was synced with the music. Both parts had good drawings and good music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bit short. Each part of this was short, and when combined they didn't make too much either. You definitely should have had some more people working on this one.

Little-Rena responds:

If it was more people, it would no longer be Drunken and Rena, lol P:
That's the main point to remember, lol.

Anyway, thanks for the review :)

[Sherlock Holmes: Xmas 06']

K

^^Good Points^^
This was quite good. I'm actually surprised that it didn't win at least a daily fifth place award considering its score and how well-made it was. The best part was the humor. It was a funny movie throughout. I liked Sherlock's open homosexuality throughout. The best scene had to be the first, with him finding the man in the chimney. The voice overs were very good. Clear and defined, and fit the characters.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some people just look a little oddly drawn. The ghosts mostly look quite strange in their shape and details, unlike say Sherlock and Watson.

Review Request Club

Pigmash responds:

Hey thanks, and I like this review requests thing, its made me want to review things more often too. Yeah, none of my Sherlock Holmes flashs win awards despite good scores and very favorable reviews, annoyingly if Id finished this 2 days earlier I could have gotten daily feature. So thanks for the feedback, and the new characters from the next episode Im currently spending a lot of time drawing.

[LOL TANKMEN]

K

^^Good Points^^
I haven't seen a Tankmen parody in a long time, so this is neat. It was a pretty average parody, and it had some good parts. The CG voices were good even though most used real voice overs. The graphics were pretty decent too, some cool drawings. The script was pretty funny too, I got some laughs.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little late for the Tankmen fad to have a real effect on your score. You should have submitted it a long time ago when the fad was still going on.

DrunkAlien responds:

Yeah, I know. :P

Thanks. :)

[Metal Gear: Untitled]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were decent. Pretty good shading, and pretty good animations too. The animations had to be the best though, very smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was more an annoyance than anything. That scene with the stereo or whatever was just incredibly annoying with that stupid beeping noise going off for way too long. The storyline wasn't very funny, and didn't make a whole lot of sense. I had absolutely no idea what the ending was about.

EB3 responds:

aggg for the love of god ITS A DAMN METAL DETECTOR!!! THAT GOES BEEP BEEP BEEP SO SNAKE TRIES TO GET RID OF HIS ITEMS!! BLEH. and there was no ending

[Fadgrounds]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat movie depicting the many odd fads on NG that have surfaced. I like how you had screenshots from each fad, and the music was very effective for the mood. I liked your drawings of the Flash and the backgrounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you could have added in some more fads into this, for more of a history of them, like BBQ and stuff like that.

Hoogiman responds:

K.

[TwelveOhSix2006]

K

^^Good Points^^
A strange movie. The graphics were pretty good in the pre-movie. You had some good drawings in there, and the animations were pretty smooth. The music throughout this was all good choices.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really find this too entertaining. It was just too random for me, and there wasn't any storyline developed in this. Then I was very disappointed at the actual movie, which was just a single frame.

numbers responds:

There IS a storyline here. Undeveloped? You don't need a 4 minute Flash to tell a simple plot :)

I wonder if you're just saying there's no plot because I didn't type it out like in ATTACK Of The Stereo..hm

thanks for the points, and critic to work on storylines (well that's a given but hgjdhf)