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[NGC Toon #3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some of this was pretty decent. The graphics throughout each part were better than I can make, the best was definitely in rai24's and daj's parts of this. I liked rai24's part for including so many NG stuff, and skeik's was cool just because of the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
I wasn't really impressed by this collab. There was no theme to each part of this, so it feels like I'm just watching a few shorts. I was really disappointed with swift's part, since that was just too fast and wasn't that funny. Overall, disappointing.

NGCTOONS responds:

Thanks for the review, with few exceptions (IE christmas one thats coming) there is no real theme for these, just old toons jammed together.

Hope you like future ones more XD

[Fart Button]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. They were detailed in the beginning that they were almost a little scary. It was also pretty funny how all of the popups that were showed in this movie were pretty similar to annoying ones that actually come up.

^^Needs Improving^^
Meh, I didn't really like this movie. The storyline wasn't very creative, I've seen my fair share of these popup barrage movies. The graphics seemed to be a little odd at some times, where the images may have been a little bit pixelated.

Shinpachi222 responds:

The flash would not export at first, so I had to turn it int an MPEG-4 and reopen it as a video clip on flash. THAT'S why it's pixilated

[Talking to a robot]

K

^^Good Points^^
The movie started out pretty good. It seemed pretty random, but it was alright. The animations were very good throughout this, and I liked the crazy personality that the animations gave to the main character. The voice overs were pretty decent too, and I liked the mix with speakonia.

^^Needs Improving^^
This just got too weird towards the end of it. What little storyline there was just started to go off into a contest of who was hotter, and other random stuff that made absolutely no sense. I like random stuff, but this just wasn't even that funny.

NightShadowTWO responds:

i understand. this flash was totally random coz nothing in the voice recording was planned. its more of an animation practice than a planned humourful flash movie

[WOS - Tag]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting idea for a collab. The music was good in all three parts, and so were the graphics. I thought that Arskagarf's part was the best for having the most content in it and the most storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
An interesting idea, but not very good in practice. There was no relation between parts in this, and it was obvious they were all very quickly done. I think the WOS has set a certain standard for their collabs, but this is far below the line.

ZombiePanda responds:

In the Flash Tag collabs, it was actually a guideline that you have anywhere between 12 hours and 24 hours to finish youre part, include it in the FLA and send it off to the next person, and you are not allowed to start on youre part prior to getting the FLA. We originally had more people involved in this collab, but a good half of the WOS was signed up for this collab, and nearly everyone dropped out of it except for us three.

[CD06 - Eat a Platypus]

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent animations and good definition in the drawings. I liked the music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Minimal effort seems to be put into this movie. It was just a picture of your character moving his hands around. There was no storyline, other characters or really anything that comprises a good Flash movie. Next time have something happen!

ZombiePanda responds:

Sorry, this was more or less me testing clockfaces for my characters, and random expressions, suchas sneezing. Anyways, thank you for the review, you always seem to comment on everyone's movies, and I have never seen anyone be so polite online.

Thanks for the review.

[LevonToons Ep 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ha, a very quick movie, which is good once in a while. The graphics were pretty good, I like how you had such defined outlines, and the animations in the faces were good as always. Funny ending too, that was about as good as it could have been.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought that the explosion was really loud and kind of annoying, and also the sprite didn't look very good.

REVIV responds:

I didn't make the explosion. Thanks for the review.

[LevonToons Ep 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie for Clock Day. The graphics were the best part. You did a great job animating this, especially in the facial animation, there was a lot of subtle stuff. The drawings were pretty well done, and I really liked the ending with Rupee getting hit with the phone. Good ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short. I don't really see why you did that with the Speakonia where it lagged quite a bit between words, that just sounded weird.

REVIV responds:

Glad you liked it!

[A Phoenix Wrong Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
Honestly one of the better Phoenix Wrong tribute movies I've seen. The reason of this is because you didn't just simply take clips and put them into the court scene, but you actually took some other backgrounds and different environments and use that. It was much more interesting than most PW movies. My favorite had to be the Ace Ventura scene.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a bad movie when I saw the black text in the first scene. Perhaps you should move that back just since I think it is a bad first impression.

Kitsunedai responds:

Ah, thanks for watching and reviewing. I had a feeling that the different scenes was a good thing.

And I'll try to remove text in the future, unless it's absolutely needed.