FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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^^Good Points^^
Wow, brilliant. I can't imagine a day when this movie would win only third place. The detail in the graphics was amazing. You clearly have a lot of talent in drawing and animating. I will definitely check out some of your other stuff. I really liked the music. It set an appropriate mood for the animations, which were really quite moving. A very powerful submission. Awesome work.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing to really improve, but what was with the 3D image at the end? Was that from something and you just made a prologue to it?

Andrew-Buckley responds:

Third is still pretty good =D, as for my drawing skills I have to work on them a still which I am. The 3D image was my attempt at a bit of drawing in Photoshop so it wasnt done using a 3D program, I drew it on purpose for that shot. It was supposed to symbolise a memory, one she wouldnt forget =), like a snap shot. Thanks for the comments.

[Sprite tutorial: Basic]

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^^Good Points^^
A tutorial with some decent information in it. From what I read, you seem to have a knowledge of what you are doing with sprites, and how to animate them, as you showed quite nicely. Good idea to put screenshots from Flash on here too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a sprite tutorial. Nothing in here that really can't be found in any other sprite tutorial. Graphics weren't amazing, and there were some parts that were just walls of text, which I'm not a fan of.

Dark-Heart responds:

^^Good Points^^
Why thank you!

^^Needs Improving^^
Touché...

[The Most Horrible Story]

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^^Good Points^^
Hehe, as sad as it would be in real life, it was pretty funny when transferred into Flash. The kid voice went very nicely with the child-like drawings. It was really an unexpected story, and I had a good time watching it and seeing what happened next. Best part was the ending, when not getting juice was the worst day of his life.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really can't think of much to say down here :(

BodiesOfStanley responds:

You get it! Cool. Now all I need to do is... oh my god TANKS!

But seriously thanks.

[Field of honor]

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^^Good Points^^
A funny little short. It started out with a very serious tone to it, as if it were a real samurai fight. The graphics were very good, smooth animations. You added a good sense of humor to this, I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending didn't really satisfy. Definitely needs a little bit more to it and some kind of ending that will wrap it up better.

MarkArandjus responds:

Sorry about the ending, I understand it didn't satisfy, but it's what the flash is all about.

Thank you very much for your review!

[Tetris Unleashed 3]

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^^Good Points^^
A very good addition to this series. The graphical effects were very nicely done, and it's obvious that you have improved a lot in your Flash skills. It was a very creative movie with an interesting storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of repetitive if you ask me. Just a little boring at some points.

Jimtopia responds:

I'll keep that in mind, thx.