FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Enter Frenzy]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I'd have to say this is one of the better animated movies I've seen from you. The joke was kind of funny, and I guess for what was offered in this, the length wasn't bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, I was hoping this would be longer. When it ended I said "That's it?" I definitely think you cut this short. You basically focused on the one joke and did nothing else with this. Overall, not bad though.

Frenzy responds:

Sorry about the length, my Flash program was running slowly and I thought it would crash any minute. Thanks for the review!

PS Some character graphics done by Element.

[The Causes]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Quite a powerful cow if you ask me, to be having crap that smells that bad and potent. Storyline was kind of weird, as that is all that happened, but I guess it was kind of entertaining. Nice job on the music and sound effects, I think they really made this look better.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, nothing really that interesting storyline-wise. A bit random, which isn't bad, but the ending really wasn't satisfying to me.

Imacow responds:

Thanks,for the review.

Storylines are overrated.

[Just Rad]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this was kind of neat to watch. There were some nice drawings in here and good animations as well. Some talent was shown throughout this movie. Good music choices too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really sure whether I really like this or not. It was very repetitive with very quick, looping animations. Some of them were even from some of your other movies, and since I haven't seen them all, many of them could have been taken from your others.

ShortMonkey responds:

I took no parts off flashes on Newgrounds onto here.... but yes, I have used some graphics from other flashes in unfinished sequels. ;-)

[Browser Battles]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This was pretty good. The voice overs were nicely done, as was the lip syncing. Graphically this was pretty nice, as you used a lot of v-cam effects to make this more interesting to watch. Some good jokes and some nice graphics to go along with that.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really get the ending, but I guess that's mostly my fault, eh?

ShortMonkey responds:

The ending when IE said "I was designed by Microsoft" was like saying "I'm shit" because it is. =D

[Alien Boy: The Haunting]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Very good job here. The graphics were quite nice, definitely unique in the drawings and animations. I liked the screaming part, since that was pretty interesting. No idea what was going on, but I still enjoyed it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was the epitamy (I spelled that wrong, fuck firefox) of a Halloween movie. I thought it was excellent.

IZSBHR responds:

OK.

[MakeLuv]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Hmm...not sure whether I like this or not. The music was good, and it was kind of humorous to watch this. A bit strange with the facial expressions and such, but it kept me interested.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, preloader doesn't work...or at least I think. After the movie fully loads, then it goes to that loader with your face on it, which is kind of scary looking. After the music starts, I think you could have been a little less repetitive to make it more interesting. Lots of time before the lyrics start...I'm sure a lot of people didn't even watch that long.

FIE responds:

Yeah, I really should have cropped the song. Cut out parts or something. It didn't occur to me at the time.

[y my 2nd movie]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Hehe, a pretty unique music video, of a comedy/opera. Something I haven't seen done in the past. The art wasn't too bad, drawings had some good detail to them. I had a quick laugh during the funny parts of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations was a little weird. There wasn't much going on, besides what was directly related to the lyrics of the song, which is kind of disappointing. Work on the lip syncing as well.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks for the review

[y my 3rd movie]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad of a movie. It had a decent storyline and a decent joke at the end. The art wasn't too bad. Even though it's seven years old, still probably better than I can do.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voices of the aliens...I thought the raspy, almost mechanical sound to them was kind of cool, but the quality was just terrible. Without the subtitles I wouldn't have had much idea what they were saying, and they were just a bit annoying overall.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks