FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Greentown is in trouble]

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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie you made. The graphics were impressive. Nice shading and very nice FBF animations. Like the beginning, when the guy jumped in the air. Definitely some animating skill here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a great storyline. Didn't really develop much. I would definitely like to see much more work from you, but it needs to have a bit more of a storyline to it.

Lorkas responds:

Hi! Thanks, that means alot to me.

Hmmm...In my opinion the Jumping scene was the best, but I was dissapointed about the last one (where he's reading) because it didn't turn out too well.

Anyway, I'll be improving my Snake movie and resubmitting it (probably), so stay tuned!

[clock day (written)]

(title in work)

It's a typical clock day movie. Very short and not much went into it. Could have used some music, or some more creative music. however, I'm still giving you a ten for this, since you are a cool dude.

Lorkas responds:

Thanks lol!

When I was making this movie, I had a fresh flash 8 download...and didn't know what it does. I broke the rule "Don't submit your first movies".

[You Are A Pirate Clock]

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^^Good Points^^
Awesome pirateclock tribute. You incorporated a lot of good things into this...Lazytown, Dodgeball, and an awesome sailing song which I've never heard before. Graphics were very good too. Great job!

^^Needs Improving^^
Too short in my opinion. Could have been a lot cooler if it were a bit longer.

MetalDart responds:

RESPOND IN WORK

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 043]

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^^Good Points^^
This was another good addition to the series. I liked Hitler's headdress or whatever you would call it. It looked pretty sweet sitting up there. Nice low filesize too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The song was really short. Only like 30 seconds long, and that doesn't offer much of a timeframe for this.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

It plays 500 times. It can last very long.