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[The Retro Skateboard]

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An interesting movie here. The drawing was great. I definitely think that is your strong point in this movie. The voice acting, or what little there was of it was well done too. A nice little storyline here, and overall it has a lot of good characteristics that a short flash should have.

LinkXRetro responds:

thanks, i am glad you liked it

[Tywo At Large Ep. #3]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely a worthwhile ten minutes of my life. I was entertained throughout. The voice acting was done very well and the effects put on voices at certain times was a good idea. Storyline was quite interesting. I liked the Breakfast Club scene, that made me laugh. Great movie, keep it up!

^^Needs Improving^^
Well can't really say too much here. The way you mixed the voice of the VP at the end sounded kind of off.

Pixmintro responds:

I'll try harder with that, the only reason we spliced two voices together was because the actress couldn't get enough "gravel" in her voice. :)

[LL- Turd's Ban Day]

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Brilliant work turd-lock. Loved the audio in this one. Interesting sound effects when turd was reading the newspaper, and the sped up scatman at the end was awesome. Short and sweet.

^^Needs Improving^^
Umm...good stuff.

turd-lock responds:

much thanks

[Spidey Trial]

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The graphics were pretty good. Definitely above average for your first movie. You added some good sound effects in here too. I'm sure the second episode will be even more successful than this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some music to fill in the gaps. The beginning I have no suggestions, but something ambient would fit well towards the end.

Rock3guito responds:

Thank you for your comments, especially those who point out my mistakes to improve my work.

I promise that the second part will be much better

[LL - Bitch]

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^^Good Points^^
Graphics were very good. Nice lighting effects, definitely can tell you know what you are doing. Voice acting was very clear, nicely done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Story wise this was a little bit lacking. I found it pretty boring and repetitive and turned it off after a few minutes. Happy Ban day anyway!

MagicWandLock responds:

Thank you for constructive criticism.

[LL - Ban Day]

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^^Good Points^^
Pretty good use of sound effects and speakonia. The laughing and bouncing sounds made this more interesting. Also nice graphical effects and such. Made quickly, but with good quality.

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Time Paradox. if pear banned himself who the hell is going to ban everyone that doesn't make a movie?

EraserLock responds:

Paradox indeed. Who knows...

[LightPowered]

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Wow, this is truly amazing, sir! The graphics are so detailed, so three dimenstional, so realistic. I've never seen something quite like it done in Flash. Your artistic skills are matched by few men to be honest. The music was an awesome choice and even though I had no idea what was going on most of the time, the graphics and odd images just made this entertaining to watch throughout the whole movie. I've still got an eyebrow cocked at the whole thing, but an honest 10/10 rating from me.

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Really the only thing was that I had no idea what was going on, but in this case, that's really not something that hurt you.

UnderARock responds:

Thanks man, glad people enjoyed the art style I used throughout the whole movie, hopefully no one really cares it doesnt make too much sense haha