FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CD08 Hits from the bong]

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^^Good Points^^
A happy clock day to you! Honestly a pretty entertaining movie, I say. A good message, of peace and forgiveness! Hilarious as well. Keep up the good work as always.

^^Needs Improving^^
A tragic ending to this movie. So sad that in his doped up rage strawberry clock was responsible for the death of his close friend green apple clock.

Arskagarf responds:

I think just for you, I might finish it the way I originally saw fit.

[Droids Vs Aliens]

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^^Good Points^^
I liked all of the sound effects you added into this. There wasn't a moment in this move where good sound effects weren't used and used well. The animations wasn't too bad, though I still have some suggestions on it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was kind of hard to follow. I think you need to try to change the camera angles some more to get better views of what is going on.

Graeme responds:

Yea, camera angles would have been cool.
I wanted to make some kinda of rig to hold the camera from a top view, but that would have been a little hard.

[The Dimension]

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^^Good Points^^
Not bad at all. I'm not at all a fan of claymation, but nonetheless, there is no doubt that this was pretty well done. Your animations are very well done. You've obviously spent a lot of time making this and making sure everything was smooth. Neat storyline as well. Hope to see more from you in the future!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing that really stands out as needing improving would be the image quality. I don't know if it was your camera or Flash that did it, but I would have liked to see some higher quality images.

monkeyontherun12 responds:

(response to needs improving) yeah dude it was flash! i was so disspapointed. the video quality was a WHOLE lot better before i put it on flash. if there is any way you know how to fix this, please help me.

[Above the Influence1945]

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^^Good Points^^
A funny concept here of moving these ads to the 1940's. I think you did a good job of making this humorous and interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you used a lot of pictures in this. Drawing out your scenes in Flash is always a better idea then just drawing over images. Even tracing would be good, but keeping work consistent throughout a movie looks much better.

blutorse4792 responds:

Only reason I do that is because I like the way it looks ;p

Thanks for the comments.

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

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^^Good Points^^
Well I guess it's nice to make something you are obviously interested in...

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole drug related storyline really didn't appeal to me. I didn't find it interesting or funny whatsoever. The audio was pretty poor. Volumes varied throughout, which made it annoying to listen to it. Graphics were pretty poor as well. Seemed like a kind of rip off of the canadians on South Park, which I never liked the look of.

D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks
btw i felt the south park canadian look was good becaue i am canadian
i will try to improve the audio and also to tell u the truth i am not a pot head i felt it would apeal as somthin that was humorous to others
also the graphics were not supposed to be amazing i made them basc and simple so they ould be easy on the eye