FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Socialist World Republic]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well I'm not communist or anything like that, but this movie was pretty awesome! I can see how people can be drawn into it if propeganda is this good. You animated very well and the music was very powerful and compelling. I think it's a great show of your talent as an animator.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you pretty much covered everything. Subtitles, good animations. Nothing wrong that I can see!

Kenzu responds:

Thank you for your review milinko!

[NG Welcome 2008]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A nice little celebration of the new year. It was pretty short, but that was good, since it didn't really have much to it. The graphics were pretty fair. Animations were smooth and you did a nice job on the drawings as well. Definitely pretty good for your first flash submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, not much to it. I thought maybe you could have done some voice overs for these guys to say something funny or whatever.

aldlv responds:

I will try the voice...
and... thanx... means a lot... that you like my first submission
=D... I'm really glad

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 146]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Wow, this one definitely looks quite different from other episodes. Hitler definitely stands out quite a bit with his huge wings. The background was appropriate of course, seeing how this is a fire pokemon. I liked the music as well. This Japanese music is quite fun to listen to.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you did a bit too much of Hitler's dressing up. Could have made his wings smaller I think. I think the Pokemon was way too small. I was first wondering "Hey where is the Pokemon?" when I first glanced at this.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

That;s the size of the artwork unfortunately.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 147]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Cute little guy here. His glassy eyes give him the look of a little baby pokemon. You did a nice job on Hitler, though I think his ears should be upward a little more. Also, a good choice of scenery for this water pokemon.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music doesn't really seem to go that well with this Pokemon. I think he's more gentle than the music is.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Dragon Pokémon and the song has dragon in the title.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 148]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Haha, what a lame transformation eh? Barely any difference at all. However, you still manage to make this one interesting, but adding the small changes between the two pokemon evident in Hitler. The background looks pretty cool. I could see this pokemon swimming in a hazy lake.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing at all...Love the music by the way. Forgot to say that.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Different :O

[Textual Adventures III]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, if you look beyond the graphics, it has pretty much what every movie on NG has. Decent humor and an odd storyline, but still kind of interesting. The ending was kind of weird, but random and funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was no audio in the actual movie. If you don't have much graphical capability with this program you use, at least put in some good sound effects and music.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Knuxrouge's Newgrounds]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A decent movie. I think you got a good amount of humor added into this with some good commentary by the characters from Sonic. I thought it was pretty interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphically this is pretty boring. You have the same looping animations over and over in the characters. Also, the framerate isn't high enough to make the animations very smooth. Definitely needs smoother animation.

knuxrouge responds:

I warned you in the note about the animation. It was at a minimum. The flash lags a bit, I chose not to fix it, becasue if I did, then the text will go by faster = more bad words.
Thanks for your review.