FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A stick (longer)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good animations. They were clear and obeyed the laws of the world very well. Nice job on that, it's the best part. This was pretty creative, a lot more than most stick movies with random violence. I thought the apple jacks were pretty funny as well as the other cereal boxes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Kind of short. I guess I didn't watch the first one either, but that must be really short !

blanblan responds:

Yup, really really short. :/

Thank you very much for reviewing. :)

[Steve Irwin - memorial]

K

^^Good points^^
I thought the preloader was pretty well done. Nice pictures, and you made it yourself with some good effects. Pretty neat music and some original pictures.

^^Needs Improving^^
Once again, and I've said this for pretty much every Steve Irwin movie made. You just tween and then fade in/out some pictures of Steve. not much effort or timeput into this.

Athi responds:

ok, well it's just supposed to show pictures... it's a memory... drawning graphics would never get the same effect

[OBEY Clock Crew]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the grapics. You had lots of detailed shading used in this movie, and all of the drawings were very professonally done. I thought the music was pretty good too of couse, neat tune. Also found it funny how all of the clocks looked extremely anry.

^^Needs Improving^^
Uhh.. no real storyline, and there really wasn't any humor in this either.

Ivanovitch responds:

[Uhh.. no real storyline, and there really wasn't any humor in this either.]

Y'know, because a lot of tutorials on Newgrounds say 'you need storyline and humor to make a good flash' doesn't mean they're essential.

There are other qualities of a movie you can judge it upon that aren't in the standard options you give a mark, such as originality, rythm, if it's somehow impressing to name a few.

Next time you review a flash, try taking into account how you feel about it, instead of thinking through Newgrounds guidelines.

[Steve Irwin: A Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good music. Definitely sets the mood for this movie. Image quality was pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, like pretty much every tribute done today. It's the same overused images and they are just faded in and out on the screen. Couldn't have taken too long to make this. Oh well, congrats on the high score O_O

Frenzy responds:

Lol, thanks... I think. o___O

Seriously though, thanks for teh review!

[Tribute to Steve Irwin]

K

What is this? Clock day or something? This movie was horrible, yet it still passed judgement in a terrible way. You obviously used this day just to get a crappy movie to pass. This is just text blurred in and out. You didn't animate at all, and even your blur was too slow and very obvious. This took no effort. I could make this in a period of about five minutes. If you like the guy so much, why don't you actually put some effort into a tribute movie? We know he died, we know what happened, no need to reiterate it again. Make this movie with something unique in it.

AniGen2 responds:

Listen dude, I think you need to get off Newgrounds. You might want to perhaps get outdoors... maybe make some new friends. I know it might seem hard, but all I'm asking is that you try. Sometimes the outside world may seem scary, but you need to conquer your fear of having an actual social life.

[A BBQ-ish Island]

K

^^Good Points^^
The voice overs were good, as were the graphics. Just like a real BBQ movie. Storyline was kind of ironic. Liked how you edited BBQ a little bit, even if it looks crappy.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs a lot more humor to it. Nothing really exciting happened at all during this and I didn't really find it too entertaining.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

I didn't edit BBQ.

[Bbq-ish Space Race]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics as always. It's kind of cool how you drew out some parts of this and the rest was the regular pictures. I really liked the voice overs you did.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sound effects were really loud. Kind of hurt my ears...

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Loud? Hmmm,i didnt notice anything.