FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos Trick-Or-Treating]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were well done. Nice use of scenery and sprite. You changed the camera around a lot, which is always good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like the last guy said, this is really boring. Besides that, the voice overs are more annoying than anything, you should have used your normal voice.

VitorAraujo responds:

I didn't know those voices annoyed people too much, I wanted to sound like a baby.

[DumbassDude Short ep 12]

K

^^Good Points^^
One good thing is that these movies seem to be getting better in nearly every aspect as you release more. You revamped the graphics, which looks great, and the animations are much smoother, and the drawings have more detail. This was I found particularly funny; I really didn't expect that ending to occur!

^^Needs Improving^^
I can see little voids in the black outlines of some things, I assume where you made lines for shading. You may want to consider cleaning that up a bit in the next episode.

DumbassDude responds:

thanks and yeah i noticed that to, ill clean up.

[8 clock!?]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were actually pretty good in this movie. You used some shading and put some detail into what you drew, and some good effects were used. The storyline was pretty funny, I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't like the sound effects at all. When there wasn't anything playing, there was a really blank feel to this. You should add some music in or something to help with the awkward silence.

HoboPorn responds:

ah yeah I felt thatw ay to but wasn't sure thanks, i'll try to put somthing to fill the blank when I can.

[Steady as She Goes! Pilot]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a good start to a series, and I can see it going pretty far and getting popular. I really liked the characters you had; they were quite different, yet both were acted very well. There was lots of humor throughout this, and it was a good length, especially for the low filesize...atleast SOME people know how to compress audio well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Every good series needs its own fancy preloader, so get to work on that.

Leet-Productions responds:

Yeah, the preloader, I was about to make one, I always add preloader last, but I wanted to submit, so I rushed it. If I didn't compress the audio, the filesize would have been like 5 megs! :P

[Happy Halloween 2006]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a very good movie that definitely is well made. I really liked the graphics in this. Everything actually looked very true to life with the great lighting and shading. This actually made me jump a little bit, which is always a unique thing to get out of a Flash movie. The music and sound effects just added to the dreary mood, and the line "Be there, if you dare" just sounds pretty cool. Great movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I notice that letting off of the doorbell doesn't change the color of it back to the original color. Nothing major, but something you may want to look into.

Art-by-Andy responds:

Thank you! Most of my time was spent on the graphics with this one. Sound also adds to the over-all package. Most times sound is about 90% of the effect. Believe it or not, while testing the flash, it scared me a few times. I'd be so focused on watching the details and tweeking stuff, that when it got loud, I'd jump. The doorbell doesn't change back to the original color because the blinking was an after-thought. Originally it didn't blink, but I thought people wouldn't know to push the button if it didn't. But, thanks for the comment. It's good to know what people notice and don't notice. I'll consider the change!