FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Swat Insanity]

Yikes!

^^Good Points^^
I hope you are joking when you say this is the best thing you've submitted!

^^Needs Improving^^
The use of stick figures looks really lame in this flash. They aren't drawn with any detail at all as is most of this flash. The bullets, backgrounds, and just about everything else was drawn poorly. The sound was more annoying than anything.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Lol I wasn't joking a year ago.

[M.S.R.E Special Edition]

Much better!

^^Good Points^^
It is now obvious that your graphical skill is not at all well displayed in the previous episodes of this series. The animations in this one were much smoother and there were a lot more of them, which made the movie a lot less boring. The voice overs were a nice touch, and the improvements you made were very worthwhile.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like was that you didn't have a more complex menu where one could pick the episode they wanted to watch. That would have been a lot more useful than having to watch every episode over again.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

yeah I was planning to do that but completely rushed the end.

[M.S.R.E ep.3]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is developing nicely, and I am becoming more interested in this series after every episode I watch. I thought the music was actually a pretty decent choice in this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this series are still lacking. For example, the big bomb scene looks pretty stupid as well as the zombie death scenes. I don't like how they just disappear.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

yeah me too but their is only one other death animation and I didn't want to over use it.

[M.S.R.E ep.2]

Well...

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is still pretty good and is developing nicely, and the blood you used was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The screen seemed to be constantly moving and there are always white borders moving in and out of the screen. The music once again, was very weird and didn't seem to fit. Also some of the animations were a little off (for example when the one zombie just disappeared).

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Yeah....see this is very old work.

[M.S.R.E ep.1]

Much better

^^Good Points^^
I felt that this is much better than episode 0. This one actually explained what was going on in the movie and gave a good introduction to the characters and their situation.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music once again, doesn't seem to go very well with the movie and the sound effects weren't very well with the animations.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Lol

[M.S.R.E ep.0]

What just happened?

^^Good Points^^
There really isn't a single point in this movie that is really great or really set this movie apart from others.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline moved very quickly and I really have no idea what the heck was going on in this movie. The scenes should have been zoomed in a lot because everything seemed to happen very far away. The music wasn't very good either, it didn't seem to fit what was happening. The graphics were also very shoddy. Certain places seemed to freeze, and there wasn't really a whole lot of animation that you did yourself and not from sprite sheets.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Yes but this movie was my first time ever using sprites. I never even tested them. So for a first time ever it cant be that bad right?

[Northeast Park]

No storyline

^^Good Points^^
This movie wasn't terrible, the drawings you made were pretty good. Not sure how many of them are original since I'm not very familiar with the TV show, but the characters you designed looked just like the show. I liked SOME of the voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
This lacks a good storyline. Not sure if it is some kind of inside joke with your friend max, but I don't find it very funny. This needs some kind of better storyline, which would help out the style score and the humor score.

Dusty-Gorilla responds:

Argh are you Rebecca Rose an an alt account?

[Fafara is better than you]

Funny, but long

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were pretty good, nicely shaded and what not. The speech by fafara was pretty funny, and I found most of his ramblings to be pretty humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was just too long. It got boring after a few minutes of hearing this guy just continue to ramble on and on. This either needs to be shorter or have some actual animation in it while fafara is talking.

vBulletinClock responds:

Fafara is better at rating movies than you?