FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FF: Pixel Quest III]

This is going nowhere..

^^Good Points^^
I'm pretty happy that you added voice overs in this one. They were actually pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said in my previous review, the storyline is completely random. Each episode has very little to do with the previous episode and just branches out into something completely different. This doesn't appeal to me and to most other people.

B0bAnther responds:

Random. Is. The. Game. :P!!! weee spleens

[FF: Pixel Quest II(Toast)]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was the humor. Max is turning out to be quite a funny character with his rantings on toast. This episode is definitely better than the last.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, I don't see much of a storyline building up here. These guys just met out of no where and now one of them is dead. What are they doing? Where are they going? This is the type of thing I would like to see answered in future episodes.

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Well, as everybody clearly knows, I have absolutely no Flash, storytelling, or productive skills. Thats why a character dies. I'm too weird for my own good.

[FF: Pixel Quest]

Not that bad

^^Good Points^^
I liked the script, I thought it was pretty funny. The storyline was also pretty funny and it made me smile.

^^Needs Improving^^
You graphical skills are...questionable. You need to work on the animations quite a bit, seeing how during the fight scenes, you characters just kind of float around. This could also use voice overs, but don't even bother if you are like 12 years old. The buttons also looked really crappy, but no big deal.

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Meh

[Your Horoscope for Today!]

Yay!

^^Good Points^^
Hooray for another great Weird Al themed flash. I must also admit that this is one of my favorite songs by Al, and you were an absolute genius in animating it. I found this very funny and the animations and drawings were great in most places.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though the graphics were good, they aren't good enough to keep this in the top fifty in my opinion. Sad...

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

watch me care.

[Ratbag & Furball]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
I like the characters and will eventually watch the rest of these movies are review them. The intro to this movie really caught my eye and got me interested, however as the movie went on, it proved not to be as good as I thought.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects were atrocious. It sounds like you just went on a raid of flashkit and got plenty of sounds from there. The sound effects should be a little more discreet. I also think you should use some shading in the graphics, but still the animations and drawings are very good.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Pal, this submission was my first and my second worst. Move on.

[The Jewish Collab]

Another pointless collab

^^Good Points^^
The only good parts of this collab were FLCLMonkey's part, which had good drawings and a good sound clips, and the picture for Squarehead's part.

^^Needs Improving^^
We all knew that Piclownjew's part would be a screamer, it is completely random and adds nothing to the movie. This collab is really stupid and no part really impressed me.

SquaresHard responds:

these collabs has as much of a point to them than all the soundboards that you make, o wait, nvm, they are pointless. here, well start making some soundboards so we can impress you, cuz soundboards take SO much more skill and talent, yep...SOUNDBOARDS!

[Ron]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty darn funny. I like the way you drew Ron and his voice over was done very well too. The other voice overs were done very well as well, nice job. I found this to be pretty funny, even though I normally don't like really random flash movies.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a preloader and some graphical improvement (except for Ron). Other than that, keep em coming.

Maxwell-FA responds:

thanks for the constructive feedback. i made this animation a few months before i got my wacom tablet, so as you can see the drawings aren't up to par. writing and voice wise i am extremely satisfied with how Ron turned out. i'll have more animations to come.

[Captain Jack!]

Well, this is retarded.

^^Good Points^^
Well, good for you on being a DDR player and choosing one of the catchiest songs on 8th mix for a flash, but really this is terrible!

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it is save to say that 99.9% of this movie was composed of nothing but random animated GIFs that have nothing to do with Captain Jack, DDR, or are even related! This is really just more annoying than anything and I have no idea how it passed judgement.

heartless-mushroom responds:

You said: " have no idea how it passed judgement"
I answer: some people love the random and senseless stuff