FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Legend of Link Part 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good episode added to this series. I thought the scenes in this were rather funny. They had humor in it that wasn't corny and it was rather fun to watch. The animations and sprite manipulation was cool, and overall this has to be my favorite of the series so far. The first scene was pretty hilarious.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why you had that big black box on the left side for the text. It just looked kind of awkward to me. And basically everything I've said for the previous episode goes here as well ;)

Emptygoddess responds:

Because the text would get angry if i did not. Once i tried not to and the letter T stabbed me over and over, leaving me just barely enough alive to finish.

[Half a collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
I kind of agree, that this got a rather low score for what was offered. The graphics were top notch as far as FBF animations go. I can tell you've had a lot of experience animating and had some fun making this one. There was lots of stuff going on, and lots of funny animations, especially that dancing guy that showed up every other scene. The finished collab looks like it will be a success if you keep up this work.

^^Needs Improving^^
What probably killed this the most was that there was no music in it. You definitely need some cool music along with a bunch of sound effects.

FlashKn1ght responds:

Well, the thing is my part of the collaboration was the 2nd half. My friend had the music.

BTW: The whole collab will come up soon, my friend just has to get his part ready, so the one on Newgrounds will be our "unrated" version, so to speak.

Thanks for the crit too, when I first started I got a ton of "You suck!"s

[The Legend of Link Part 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good continuation of the first episode. Glad it got off to a quick start and picked up right where it left off. The sprite manipulation and animation was the best part in this. The storyline was good too, seems like a good series forming.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, the stationary camera isn't doing you any good. It would be a lot more interesting if you moved it around a bit.

Emptygoddess responds:

The stationary camera is not only doing me good, it is the true joy of the ages.

[Librarians are hiding...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad for the length of this. I thought you did a fairly good job on the graphics and animations. They were simple, but still pretty cool. It was a little humorous just because of how strange this is.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a little more to go on after this ended. It didn't really say what the hell they were hiding, and this just doesn't feel like this was ended satisfactorily.

Ninjkabat responds:

I will admit that I was originally planning to add more to it, like to have some sort of chase scene followed by the librarian that we see shooting the dart. But I ditched all that when, well, it took longer to make than expected, and also when I realized that a short little one had a better chance of possibly making it on the Colbert Report. (a slim chance is a better possibility than no chance).

But I'm glad you liked the animation. I'm currently working on a very long and ambitious music video, so when that comes out hopefully I'll have a submission of adaquate length to keep people's attention.

[The Legend Of Link Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Started out with that SOAD song, which is necessary in every Link type movie so good job. The start to this movie after the song was pretty interesting. I liked what he was saying, it was kind of humorous. Also, looks like the next episode will bring some interesting storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
I hope you don't use that long intro to each episode. Overall, could use some more animation, and perhaps some zooming in on Link at times.

Emptygoddess responds:

If i want to i'll play the song over and over again for all eternity until the stars wind down to die.

[Socialist European Union]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was a great choice, as classical music really seems to build suspense, which this movie definitely did with the drawings of many mobs raising their hands. The graphics were pretty cool, especially how you used the colors.

^^Needs Improving^^
Does this loop or something? It was a little boring how it was just scenes of people in front of monuments or whatever. Really could have used something else...perhaps some v-cam effects.

Review Request Club

Kenzu responds:

It seems to me that you didn't watch the whole movie. Well if you havent, you have missed the best part.

I personally like the part with ringing bells and stars falling from the skies. And I like the firework as well.

A pity you havent seen it all.

[Let'sPlayAPrankOnGolden]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was kind of humorous, and I liked the idea of the movie. The sound was nice, especially the screaming.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could use some improving, the drawings are very simplistic and kind of boring. Also, what the hell did they say at the end that was the prank? I watched it twice but not sure exactly what went on there.

SalmonBerryClock responds:

its like that on purpose

[Dark Who? Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I guess you put some effort into this. Pretty much everything in it was pretty average, nothing too special though.

^^Needs Improving^^
First thing is the voice acting. Some is louder than others, which is annoying, and everything is very grainy when it plays. The storyline wasn't really that interesting or creative, very run of the mill. And please don't gradient fill darky kirby. Or at least not like you did in this.

InfinateLoop responds:

Yeah, we'll fix that in the next episode. This was just an introduction.

[WOS TT 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Haven't seen one of these in a while, so this was a nice surprise. I thought Arskagarf's was the best part, but most of these were actually pretty good quality for a TT. Funny stuff throughout and good music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Eww, the menu was terrible. Usually you have fancy menus with fancy buttons, but this was just plain.

Arskagarf responds:

You're right about the menus, but I almost didn't even do the rollovers. Thanks for the legitamet review.