FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[(Pablo)Detective-Tortilla]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yeah, looks like a pretty good movie you've got going on here. The drawings were cool. Nice human drawings and lots of details in the backgrounds and stuff. I like how you animated to the clip that you had, which followed it very well. Funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's kind of weird how you mixed anime style characters and regular characters. Just looked kind of strange.

Keveta2 responds:

Strange indeed lol, I can only draw anime chicks :< or else they end up even weirder :x

[Previously on House]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yeah, this pretty much sums up the show from my point of view. Some angry doctor always doing things that the nurses don't think is right. Very funny how you portrayed the characters, and there were hyperboles throughout, which made this pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Voices were a little low. They were a bit hard to hear at first in this movie. Try making them clearer next time.

Sticky responds:

I made the voices as clear as I could...

The problem was the music tends to muffle the voices a bit but I didn't want the music too low so I did what I thought was best...

anyway, thanks

[AA- Pineapple Atom Collab]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good music throughout to be honest. Liked that part of it. The graphics weren't too bad in this either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, not a very good show for your first collab. To be honest the different parts of this weren't too interesting. They were all just loops, and none of them were too creative or entertaining. I noticed that Soviet's part doesn't have a menu button, which is pretty annoying.

JackflashProductions responds:

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[DeathArena]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part was definitely the music. You had a lot of cool songs in this movie and changed them often, which made things less boring. The movie wasn't too bad, I like the concept of it at least.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how quickly this moves. Also, it would be better if everyone didn't die within five seconds, that was kind of lame. Work on slowing things down, and eventually doing some more animating, perhaps with a little more than just circles.

Review Request Club.

HomerDough responds:

thnx

[Korean Love Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had a lot of cool characteristics. The song was pretty unique, which I liked. The graphics were pretty good too. You had great perspective, and while moving the camera you showed realistic background movement. Cool characters as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I just didn't feel this going well with the music. The characters didn't really look like they were saying lines from the song, and I just didn't get that feel for some reason. Also, the drawings were very inconsistent. Sometimes the backgrounds were beautiful and had lots of detail, and other times, they looked very bland and unprofessional.

Review Request Club

Kenzu responds:

I'm happy you like my work.

Maybe you haven't thought about that, but it didn't look like the characters were saying lines from the song, because they WERE NOT saying lines from the song, but lines to the text I have given them. That's all

[Mushrum 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie wasn't really that bad. The graphics were kind of nice with some custom drawn things and other stuff traced. The storyline was mildly funny, and overall, not as bad as some of the reviews would have you think.

^^Needs Improving^^
Lacks a good amount of animation here. The only animations are very simple and are mostly just looping movie clips. A little short too and a bit lacking as far a storyline goes. It was a decent movie, but could use a lot of improving.

CDClock responds:

This was just kind of a joke but ok. Thanks for the constructive review.