FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[lotr : Second Breakfest]

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^^Good Points^^
Yeah, a pretty good movie in my opinion. Arranging the sound clips was done well, and I like how you made the characters. The faces were drawn perfectly for what they were saying. Funny ending as well, I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall the art could use a little bit of improvement. You didn't do any shading, and the animation looked a little bit elementary. Work on making that part of this a little more realistic.

Griffinflash responds:

Thank you, I'll consider doing that, i knew that I had forgotten to do something. Btw, I'm not an artist.

[Mac VS PC]

K

^^Good Points^^
A good idea to have a mac commercial parody, as it seems you are on the microsoft side, which I like. I think you should continue this series with some better episodes in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was kind of disappointing. You said it was short, but this was just ridiculous. There was only one joke in the entire episode, and it wasn't even that funny.

SalmonBerryClock responds:

I'm not on the microsoft side. I have a Mac and I plan on keeping it that way. Microsoft it stupid.
And no, I'm not making any more episodes.

[CC- Gone Fishing]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good, especially for your first CC related movie. The graphics were very smooth, cool drawings of your characters and environments. The movie was nice and short, but still had quite a bit of humor in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess you could have used some vcam effects to zoom in a little bit or something, just to movie things around and make it more interesting.

Wikk responds:

I was going to use a vcam but i didnt know how to use it and make the subtitles stay on screen all the time, oh well thanks for the review!

[Beautiful Pico Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely good graphics. I liked the layering in this movie, it created a very realistic effect with the animations. Cool music too. As far as loops go, this wasn't so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's not even pico day. In fact, there is a few months until that day, so this was just a little bit random. Also, just a loop, which I don't really like.

Review Request Club

ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review. I'm going to make a better one for Pico day. :)

[Legend of Zelda : HTW]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a very cool movie that you made. It's definitely a new concept instead of the average sprite movie. The graphics were nice, cool sprite manipulation and animation too. The music and sound effects were good, as they changed throughout the movie. Looks like it will be a good series if you continue making it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The framerate looked a little bit slow to me, and you should definitely up it to at least 20 next time.

Slock responds:

Thank you for taking the time to review ! I made this a while ago and know I'm done with sprites lol. I am very busy studying but I'm working on something else, and so far I think its better than this one ! When I get some time I will finish it...well thanks again, I worked really hard on that one, thats about a month of work :P

[Ackbar: Lessons Learned]

K

^^Good Points^^
Cool to see a fan made ackbar movie here on NG. The graphics weren't bad, though I guess you really didn't make them. Some of the sound clips were pretty cool as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short for my tastes. Seems like you kind of rushed it. Work on a little bit better of a storyline rather than just having a bunch of sound clips.

ZeldaFreakNeo responds:

thanks! Not very many people actually give out tips. Im working on a longer fan one.

[GG - Glocks at the Mall 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another episode of this series. This time meeting another glock, slurpee I believe. Again, good drawings and animations of your characters and nice voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm a little disappointing that the first episode doesn't have really anything to do with this one. I thought perhaps it would be a continuations with rofl, but looks like it will be just them meeting new characters throughout.

SmirnoffGlock responds:

k.

[GG - Beautiful Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hmm, nice to see that the GG is back in action. I liked the graphics in this. Cool drawings and neat animation. The ending had its humor too people, come on now.

^^Needs Improving^^
It was a really long loop, which was annoying. Would have been cool if you had added a little more than a tween of a movie clip.

AlbinoGlock responds:

nop