FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Duders: Emo Farm]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. It was a little bit funny just because of how random and strange it is, but I got some entertainment out of it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This submission was just really weird. First off, didn't really like the characters. The one had that really high voice, and the other talked like an idiot. The animations weren't great, try to work on them. You will get better though with more practice.

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

I'm practicing alot don't worry.

lol Thoughs were me and Jays real voices ouch.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this short. The introduction to it was pretty neat, and you changed the mood right after that, which was pretty funny. Liked the music, it was a great way to introduce the characters in this new series.

^^Needs Improving^^
The art wasn't very good at all. I wasn't too happy with you just having plain black backgrounds either. Having some type of background would have been much better.

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Jimtopia responds:

I was setting mood. And that mood was black. Lol, thx for the review.

[Fleep]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was really an interesting movie! I liked the sketched style, and drawing some of this in Flash, and the rest on paper. The flashed images were cool, and the music added to the abstract mood of it as well. I really like when the conversations started, as they made absolutely no sense, but it was really cool to see what came out of your head.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...just work on keeping your work consistent and keep working on it.

Beyond-Insanity-666 responds:

Thanks for the review, and I must say that I think this is my most "consistent" work to date as it was all done on models (if you will) so they were always in proportion. Maybe I'm just mis understanding you're useage of the word.
Chow for now.

[BBQBBM meets Mr. Global]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a half decent tribute to BBQ. I liked how you used the Windows 98 song clip in this, which was pretty funny. This looked like a true movie by BBQ also, which was kind of cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing special about this though. The storyline wasn't very good, as you basically just gave up on storyline when you did the Windows 98 clip. That basically made me think a lot less of this movie.

Carbonwater responds:

K.

[SO-DUH]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked this, it was kind of cute. It was cool how you made it seem like the shadowed can was a bad guy, but then you changed it all with the ending, which was kind of corny, but made me chuckle. You've got some good animating skill too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, a little corny for an ending, which I'm sure a lot of people won't really appreciate as much as I have.

petemanpeter responds:

Yeah, the whole point of it was to be stupid. Even I think it's corny, and I made it.

[Rotoscoping]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphics weren't bad. I liked the animations in this, they were rather realistic looking, and the sound effects were pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very short movie, with just random violence to make up the storyline, I wasn't very interested in this. I thought the drawings weren't that good, in fact they lacked a lot of detail to me. Not a great movie in my opinion.

Jackassboy responds:

thanks. im getting into this type of "animation" now. hopefully i can get better at this.

[Vote Or Die! (Smb)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Haha, a rather funny movie you made here. Having a South Park clip play and animated to SM sprites was rather unexpected, and you did a great job with the animation. The lip syncing was on pretty well, and I really thought it was cool how well you manipulated the sprites, and how you weren't afraid to do a lot of close in scenes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I would say you could improve on the black backgrounds. Perhaps added something other than just plain black.

Hydrogenic responds:

Thanks for that great review, I'll keep that in mind for my next flash

[How Badass is he? -T.L.L.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool little short addition to supplement the regular series. It was rather funny some of the commentary the people gave, and the interview style of this was interesting to see. Quite funny to watch this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not too much animation in this one compared to the others. It was mostly just small stuff with just the text.

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Emptygoddess responds:

Or better yet. "Yes"

[The Legend of Link Part 4]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a fine conclusion to the series. I liked how it wasn't the average fight scene in there, and was mostly filled with humorous talking between the characters. Overall a pretty satisfying ending to the series. Good job on this one, I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall a very good series. But if you ever make another one, the only advice I have is to become familiar with the V-cam. Zooming in and moving the camera around will make the movies a lot more interesting.

Emptygoddess responds:

The V-cam is the work of lothar, demon goddess of the underearth. So i will not touch it.