FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[hoW to shoop da whoop.]

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^^Good Points^^
Hmm..I kind of like the sarcastic humor throughout this "tutorial". The instructions made no sense, but they sure made me laugh, especially with Spiderman needing the help.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really an odd music choice however, as many people are very annoyed by that song. A better intro would be good too, as that one is just terrible and looks very unprofessional.

pollution-films-inc responds:

I LOVE YOU LETS HAVE SEX K?

[Roll Along]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a cool movie you have here, one of the better ones I've seen from Star Day. The animation style was cool, very smooth, and the drawings were equally good. Parts of this were pretty cute, like the flower and the bee falling in love. I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I had a hard time understanding what the heck was going on. I got the part that they fall in love, but what's with the thing that scans their tongues or whatever? Anyway, not bad.

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Ying-yong responds:

Yeah, that part I don't even get which isn't very good, but glad you liked the movie anyway.

[Helmskee - myspace]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good movie. It was a parody of a classic song, and well done at that. The lyrics were creative and the animation and graphics to go along were also just as good. This was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would suggest subtitles for this. I had a bit of trouble hearing the beginning of this movie without them.

remyzero responds:

http://aniboom.com/Player.asp x?v=12569

I didn't add subtitles because the people running the contest will do it for me. The version posted on that link has subtitles.
BUT THANKS for your kind words!

[Pico Speed Sketch]

K

^^Good Points^^
These things are usually pretty cool, and it seems like you've had some experience making these, as it was very well made. The change throughout each frame, which had to be at least a hundred, was very uniform, creating a smooth looking animation.

^^Needs Improving^^
The lighting did change a bit throughout, which was kind of annoying, and could have been easily avoided.

M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the review.

The light variations were caused because every time I went to draw a line and moved my hand back, the light would change and only go back after about 3 - 5 seconds. Considering there was about 800 frames in the movie, I wasn't always prepared to wait 5 seconds, so thats why. But one helpful reviewer told me how to get the light balance write, so it is more or less fixed now.

[Fictional Mind]

K

^^Good Points^^
This looked to be pretty awesome. The effects you used were pretty cool in this. The graphical style and realism in the movements was very good. I also like the staticky overlay. Looks like the full collab will be great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you'll be lucky to get random people with skill to match yours and make a good collab. I'm sure you would be better off just making a full movie by yourself.

Dvid responds:

I don't have the patience to make full moevies ^^ I do good at flash website tho' but thanks for your confidence anyway :D