FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom's Wedding Day!]

K

^^Good Points^^
For a movie that you just started last night, this really turned out quite good. The graphics are surprisingly good, especially the people you drew. I feel you transferred them into Flash well. Same with the voice overs. I like how you captured Wade anger. Funny movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short, but for the time you had with this, not bad one bit.

Rudy responds:

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked the animation. I like that it had all the same voices because it added humor. I tried pretty hard on this one :) So it all adds up in the end.

[Naruto VS Sasuke:Showdown]

K

^^Good Points^^
Better than 90% of the Naruto vs. Sasuke movies that come out on NG. You had some cool graphical effects, like the views of Naruto's face and other zooms. Smooth animation as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This idea is extremely unoriginal. There is a NvS movie at least a few times a day, you are just lucky you have skill with animation.

Leftovers responds:

Yeah, I'll try to do something more original next time. Thanks for the review.

[Sr. Pico]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the music was the best part about this. Especially when he was shooting his gun. Where did you get that song from?

^^Needs Improving^^
Not very good graphically, and this looks really rushed. And something was wrong with his head in the beginning as well. The ending was completely stupid, as I don't read spanish, and it was really short.

Imacow responds:

Thanks for the review.

The song is from the game "Excitebike" on the NES.

The ending text translated to "I have a mouse in my pants".

[Picoday 2007 Sun Parody]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, sunshine, I remember that stuff. I liked your pico drawings, and the sun interactivity was pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Meh, a little bit lame. Not much graphically, and I think you should have made the background just a different shade of orange instead of black. No secret either :(

Seamonky responds:

-The Pico drawing actually sucks becuase I had to use the line tool with a shitty ass mouse.
-You can always move the Sun. :)
-It seems like everyone doesn't like the background colors. :(
-A secret huh? Hmm....

-$3@M0#K¥

[Pico Idol]

K

^^Good Points^^
Parts of this were pretty funny. I liked Stamper's song that he sung and also the judges were pretty funny to watch. The graphics were the best part. Good drawings and shading as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly I wasn't too impressed by it. Mainly because of the level of humor in this. I was expecting a lot more and found myself pretty bored throughout most of this.

Rudy responds:

Thank you for your review. I'm sorry that you got bored of this animation :(

[Pico:What have I done]

K

^^Good Points^^
You have a keen style of drawing and animation. A very unique design of Pico and a very unique storyline. It was interesting to watch this, with the powerful music. Very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this seemed like just sketches or storyboard. Looked unfinished with little background detail.

paddy-ryan responds:

On the Improvements,
My next flash (for Clockday)has allready being completly story-borded unlike all my flash upto this point and is going well so the problems should be fix.

thanks for the review

[The Powerpuff Pico Crew]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really a funny spoof of Powderpuff girls. I like how you designed this to be similar to the real show, even with the crappy drawings of them flying. Jesus was a hilarious addition to this, and the drawings were humorous throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
When you were introducing the characters the sound quality was a little off and staticy.

AdamJack responds:

Now that I've got a better microphone, there will never be a bad recording from me ever again. Thanks. :)

[Pico's "What the fuck!?"]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was really good. The graphics were great. Lots of shading and three dimensional animations were always cool. The random events were all unexpected and rather funny at times. Like when Pico ran into the hydrant instead of being crushed by the safe. Anyway, Tom eating his baby was pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like how you said that you weren't finished. This made no sense anyway, you could have just as easily integrated Tom into the end without anyone noticing you didn't finish.

Entrails responds:

Yeah. That whole "I ran out of time" was a bit stupid, but I was just so disappointed at the flash. That it was so short and that not so much stuff happened in it.