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[Ghost Motel 2]

Better

^^Good Points^^
I was delighted to find that you didn't have some crappy screamer for an ending this time, which was a relief. The music once again, is a good choice. This has a much better storyline because we find out more about this world and the conflict that is going to be facing our main character.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sometimes the drawings were not very good. The most notable place, which I'm sure you've herad in just about ever review is the dead body. The voice overs, while they aren't done poorly, just have a lot of static and are very low quality.

Violet-AIM responds:

Yeah we try and work on the voices better for each one, they do get slighty better, thanks for the nice review.

[The Enchanted Sword 1]

Not a bad start

^^Good Points^^
Once again, you have made some great fight scenes in this movie and I'm pretty impressed with how they turned out. The animations are very good and very smooth. The music also went along well with the ninja theme.

^^Needs Improving^^
You don't really give us much of a storyline, which would have made a lot more sense. Right now this seems like just another show of your skills in making fight scenes.

ThorKingOfTheVikings responds:

I disagree with less storyline, but I guess it needs to be explained, once I get my batting average up from these nooby submissions you will see ;)

[Fighting 'Till Dawn]

Short, but still good.

^^Good Points^^
This was really good. I liked how creative you got with the fight scene. All the flips you did must have been pretty hard and must have taken some planning. This is probably some of the better stopmotion fighting I've seen yet. The randomness at the end was funny too and a nice way to end this.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was way too short. It didn't have quite as good of a storyline as the prequel either.

ThorKingOfTheVikings responds:

thanks for yet ANOTHER great review lol. seriously thanks for taking the time to do this, very appreciated! Erm, storyline, none of our movies reall have a storyline lol!

P.s. first to review all my movies, how does it feel?
-yodd

[ST: First Contact Alt.]

Pretty bad

^^Good Points^^
The only part I liked about this was when Warf's head just flew into the air. The cheesyness of that scene just made me chuckle a little bit.

^^Needs Improving^^
You graphics are pretty bad. The animations are just tween and rotations and such, which shows that you didn't put a whole bunch of time into this. The storyline is kind of stupid because it is pretty hard to follow. I didn't enjoy watching this at all.

vex-xiang responds:

Thanks for the honest and accurate review :)

1 chuckle made it all worth while.

[Fat Kid Plays POP!]

meh...

^^Good Points^^
Strange idea, but I guess this turned out OK. It was kind of cute and kind of entertaining as well. The drawings weren't bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
This submission is just lacking a lot of substance. It's just a fat kid making farting noises. This isn't that great and I probably wouldn't watch something if you did it similarly to this.

stik responds:

Have a look at some of my other work. It's alot different.