FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Technology Today Episode1]

I'm looking forward to a sequel

^^Good Points^^
Well, I will definitely be looking out for a second episode of this series, since this one is pretty promising. I thought the trance music was very cool, and the voice overs were done well. The animations were pretty good as well. I liked the storyline and the great humor. I laughed a few times at this, which is more than most movies. Good job.

^^Needs Improving^^
There were a few minor spelling mistakes. I didn't really like your drawings either. They just seemed really strange to me, but your animations made up for the drawings.

DrClay responds:

i always kinda drew like that.
so wat if they may seem a little strange.
to me they done seem strange at all.
every flash author draw stuff in his or her own way.

its true
look around sometimes and you will see that everyone makes their flash differently.
and i dont mean just by ideas.
everyone's Character is drawn in the authors own way.

and these characters were drawn in my own way.

[Boners Avenger 2]

Swell!

^^Good Points^^
When this movie first started I was a little weary and didn't quite like it, but as it went on, it sort of grew on me and I kind of enjoyed it. The music was a good choice, and the randomness was pretty funny. It was much more interesting than the last episode in the series, but it still had some funny reviews in it. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like about the first minute of this, and that is about all.

Starberry responds:

z too bad you didnt find the secret joke!

[Boners Avenger]

Good times...

^^Good Points^^
First off, I'd like to say that D-Code is one of the most awesome songs of all time, good job on using in this submission. Next, I'd like to say that this was very funny. Reading abusive reviews is always funny, and seeing them over and over the funny just keeps building. I thought it was funny how you pointed out KWAS in this, he really sucks. I had some definite fun watching this, nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty fast paced, making some stuff hard to read, and after a while, this got a little bit boring. What would have been better is if you had taken less reviews and put your own commentary in about them. That usually seems to work best with these.

Starberry responds:

yeah i didnt do any commentary but i would have just used speakonia anyway so :/

[A Side Of Stupidity]

Kind of stupid

^^Good Points^^
In parts of this the drawings were pretty good. The background was drawn well and the guy on the couch was drawn well, as well as the penguin. I liked your voice overs too. The accent sounded natural, and foreign people always make things funnier!

^^Needs Improving^^
The guy who said he had a penguin is drawn horribly compared to your other characters. I'm not sure what happened, but this looks pretty bad. The randomness in this isn't very funny to me. It gave me a little smile, but it's just too random.

IMMonkey responds:

While I agree with your comments, I think you were a little harsh with your scoring.

[RupeeClock gets aids!!]

Meh.

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were good in the beginning. I found that whole scene to be quite funny, but after that this movie went downhill.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline was kind of weird. I don't see Rupee getting AIDS at all, or really anything to do with Rupee. The drawings after the first scene were pretty shoddy for the most part, and the sound effects were really loud and sudden. I was expecting this to be better since RupeeClock is in the title.

ShitlordCentral responds:

Didn't you watch it omg he got aids because no-one liked him.

Poor Rupee =(

[Final Extacy]

lol...

^^Good Points^^
That movie was definitely a unique piece. The humor was definitely there. The best part was when Gaylord appeared and when he fought them...hilarious. The music was good, and I loved the sound effects; they were quite funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't too good. Your animations were kind of sparse, especially during scenes with a lot of talking. Add some more animation in these parts.

We3dy responds:

Thanks for the review, and yeah, I know the animation was kind of sparse, which is something I'm going to fix in part two.

[Arskagarf TT]

A good TT!

^^Good Points^^
It seems like a rare occurance for a TT on NG to be of high quality, however, this one seems to break the norm and is actually a good collab with lots of good parts to it. Arskagarf's part and Kelp's part were my two favorites, but each part was unique. For the most part they weren't just short, crappy loops, and some time was actually put into them. The W.O.S seems to be delivering good work every time!

^^Needs Improving^^
Um...there was one part, forget which one that was just a loop. Loops aren't very good in my opinion.

Arskagarf responds:

Rinoa's and Cannabis Clock's were both loops. I did like Rinoa's because of the fact that it shows Arskagarf with the world on a shank. You are right about how this turned out, it did seem to be quite better than most time trials you would come across. Thank you for another swell review.

[A day with a cactus part2]

LOL!

^^Good Points^^
This second edition is even better than the first one! The graphics were much better, which really helped me to get into this more and enjoy it more. I liked the voice overs and of course there was a ton of humor in this movie. Very good job on this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could still use the most improving out of anything in this movie, but I guess it kind of characterizes the movie, so your still golden man.

kingofthecactus responds:

Yeah sorry, I suck at drawing.