FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MK scorpion vs. Noob]

MY EARS!

^^Good Points^^
This movie is very well done for the most part. I really liked how well you animated the fight scene in this movie. It was really quite exciting, and much better than most of the sprite fight scenes on NG. Very well done. I also liked the sound effects, they were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
As the title suggests, something in the sound department I didn't like. That was the music. What kind of vocals were they?? Seriously, pick something more techno or something. I think it would go a lot better.

filipinoy69 responds:

hahaha...thats hard core...its not finish yet...yeah ill try to think of techno stuff

[Bbq walking down the park]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
My favorite part during this movie was when you shot the scared little boy. I found it funny when you said "Attacker!" and then shot him. Priceless stuff. The music was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have no idea why it is becoming your thing to do your drawings in Paint, it just looks really crappy, and animating must be hard, since you didn't really put any in, just freeze frames of different actions.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Paint is for tru pro's

[#RELAX#]

This is kind of funny.

^^Good Points^^
I think this submission was actually pretty good, though I am usually not a big fan of your work. I thought some of the photoshopping you did towards the end were done well, mainly the Hitler one. I also like the "Newgrounds causes cancer" line, that made me lol. The music was pretty relaxing too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't show a lot of actual animating other than the slow zooming of a few items. Most of the pictures you used in this weren't that entertaining either.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Thank you for review

[Muffin of Doom]

Interesting...

^^Good Points^^
This is an interesting movie. The main character is an evil muffin, which is unique. I liked the music, it flowed with the animations very well. I liked your drawing style and the constant camera angle changes you made. The end was kind of cute too.

^^Needs Improving^^
It seemed like you tried to make this too much of a FBF movie with just random stuff. A lot of the time you were just making shapes and moving them around, which really had nothing to do with the storyline.

Khold responds:

Thank you :)
The thing is though... random shapes are what i like about FBFs :P
If you've seen even my Paper and Pencil drawings, a lot of them are just random shapes that look really cool... originally i wanted to make a random-shape FBF with a muffin cameo, but then i thought "why not just tell the story of 'Muffin of Doom?'" so i tried to make it half-and-half, but i see what you mean, though.

the random FBF parts are dividers between the scenes of the story.

[Sunshine Episode 666]

Ah!

^^Good Points^^
It's always nice to see a change in the series every couple of episodes and this definitely did it. The design looked very hellish and was quite scary. The change in music is also refreshing.

^^Needs Improving^^
The design is a little hard on the eyes since the text is the same color, and the flowers don't look very scary :(

Andersson responds:

Thank you very much for the review and I can do nothing else than agree with your opinions.

/Mathias Andersson

[Pokemon Emerald]

Ok.

^^Good Points^^
Your animation is very good. The sprites movie very accurately. I liked the boxes you used for the text. The text was easy to read and the boxes were a nice shade of blue. I liked the background music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline is a little lame in this. Ash gets called gay then kills everyone. The violence was kind of lame and didn't look very well done.

thebluedragon responds:

*sniff* T_T

[666]

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^^Good Points^^
The ending was kind of funny. Thought the voice overs in that part were kind of funny. The voice overs were very clear and of good quality. Not a bad movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings aren't very good. You need to use more shading and what not to give more definition. The death animation was pretty lame too.

JunkFoodKing responds:

yeah, I'm not the best at that kind of stuff. However, I only abandoned shading in this one cause it takes place in the dark (the eyes aren't white, they are the first hue of gray), and I couldn't use lighter colors for lack of light source. (the lava lamp would have a red light with shading, but this looked too weird. However, thank you for your words. Not a lot of people thought the voice acting was good in this one.