FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL - Cut!]

Not half bad.

^^Good Points^^
For this being your first Lock movie and second movie ever, I think this is pretty good. The graphics were good. The perspective was good, as well as the shading and drawings. The storyline had some humor as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I hate that british accent on Speakonia, and you should take it off just because it sucks.

FlashShark responds:

Thanks, a very honest review for once.

[Lockday 06: TruffleLock]

No.

^^Good Points^^
Graphically this flash was well done. The shading was excellent, and the drawings were well done as well. Very nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I read your edit to the description, and I don't care. I still watched it and will still review it. This was bad. It had absolutely no point whatsoever. There was not storyline that went anywhere, though breadfruit went many places. A storyline would supplement this quite well!

TruffleClock responds:

i am completely ignoring your suggestions becuase they are shitty and storylines are gay

[LL-SAW part 2]

Not the best sequel

^^Good Points^^
This got good at the end when Peanutbutter stabbed the other guy (not sure his name). I liked the speakonia, and the storyline was pretty good. I liked the ending as well. It made me roffle.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like how the triangle dealies above the locks kept moving long after the character was done speaking.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

yes the speaking was messed up I had to cut it into 2 parts the movie was originally 24 fps but when I put it into the new document i forgot to change it back to 24 so its at 12 fps the second movie.

[Towel Day]

Pretty good.

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was an interesting movie. I would have never known there is a such thing as Towel Day had it not been for this. I found this to be quite interesting. The explanation of why a towel is usefull is pretty interesting, and the way you animated it was had some humor in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm sure you've already heard enough about the voice, so I will stay away from that. The graphics need some shading or something to make them look less like someone without any skill drew them.

edit-undo responds:

Thank you for your advice. I will consider all reveiws, and maybe re-make this for towel day next year, with much improved graphics, sound, etc. Oh, and i have changed the voice now, it isnt low any more.

[Loki Clocks Tragic Demise]

I liked it

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the graphics in this were pretty decent. The brick wall had a lot of detail and the animations were clean. I liked the song, it made me laugh. I thought the storyline was kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say that I liked the way that this looped, just because I don't like loops. Also, there isn't much of a storyline in this movie.

LokiClock responds:

Thank you. Sorry to say, but your suggestions really can't be helped... There weren't any other posts on the board it was based off of, and... well, it's a music loop. What can I say?

[CC - ______ Is Dizzy]

Not the best CC collab

^^Good Points^^
Not good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This collab wasn't very good. The music was extremely annoying, and it is in every part of this collab, which makes it even worse. Each clip was very short and none of them were really funny.

MawOfTheDragon responds:

The music is the entire point.

[The sunny side]

Interesting

^^Good Points^^
I really liked the graphical style in this. The effect you used to make the screen seem old/dirty looks pretty cool. The drawings were funny looking and I liked how this looked graphically. I will say that I laughed at that line "I'll sell these cookies lol". The music went with the movie...I guess.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting something much funnier than this. This just came across as a little strange to me, and I'm not sure I really liked this movie's storyline too much.

Lincoln-lol responds:

hey cool review! =)
~thnx

[Rehashed-fwl]

Pretty average

^^Good Points^^
It's obvious that you've got some talent in doing FBF movies. The animations in this were very smooth and were varying throughout the song. I liked the song as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unlike the last review, I don't feel that this was synced well with the music at all. I'm not sure if you even attempted to do this. If you did, it wasn't done very well. I also didn't like the random shapes that just appeared out of no where, like the red squares and what not. I would rather see them drawn out like other FBF movies. This wasn't very exciting and was just average.

Review Request Club

Legend responds:

I never try to synch the movies to the sounds. The reason I keep submitting these is I keep trying to do better and better, but I dont feel like getting the others deleted. Basically they are all versions of the one before it.
anyway, thanks for the reveiw.