FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Al-Quada Music Video]

Crap

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were actually half decent. Your planes and ships look pretty accurate, and it looks like you spent some time drawing them.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure what you are really trying to accomplish here. This is supposed to be an Al-Queda Music video, however, you have the al queda playing drums and dancing to an American punk/rock song, then getting blown up. I don't really understand the logic behind this. The music doesn't make sense and doesn't go well with this movie at all. The explosion at the end looked really crappy as well.

SMIRF-06 responds:

I really don't know what I was "supposed" to aaccomplish, i did this for fun, so i guess i did? bec. i had fun doing it. Don't take the Title soooo very serious there not singing the American song, its just the song i chose and it fits just fine im really sorry everyone doesn't connect Dot A and B....There was no LOGIC in making it, im sorry if you were looking for some sort of Philosphical meaning or moral...cause there is not one...i wonder what rocks you ppl crawl from ?

[A Robot Killed His Family]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The animations are very smooth and look quite nice and pretty realistic. I was really impressed how you animated the man flipping. The sound effects were well-placed, and the music was a good pace for the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The title doesn't leave much for the imagination...Also this is a little boring since there isn't any background and very little color. Add some coloring and some simple background items and this will look a lot better.

mrwesticles responds:

All elements that I'm looking forward to adding to the next one. Thanks for the valuable input and I agree completely.

[Truth about bbqbefbrgrman]

I don't want to know anyway

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in the beginning, it was pretty funky! I also thought that the sound clip at the end was mildly funny. I like how you led the users on and then gave them that ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I'm not sure how many people care to know the truth, I sure don't, so I wasn't disappointed when you would tell me. The drawings were pretty poor and looked very unprofessional.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Yeah well you have to understand that drawings were made in hmm...10 seconds? With ms paint so yeah

[zZz Moscow Beijing]

What the hell?

^^Good Points^^
The song was the best part of this. Remember that I HATED THE SONG.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't get this? I'm usually a fan of the CC, but this is just weird. What the hell does this promote or stand for? This took very little talent, it's made up of some low quality pictures and some scrolling text. I don't get it.

Kenzu responds:

these pictures aren't low quality and cannot become better at this size. I would have to make them bigger and then, you wouldn't be able to see the lyrics.

[BB- Shitberry TT #1]

Not bad for crap!

^^Good Points^^
The graphics on each part were suprisingly pretty good. There was nice animations and drawings complete with shading and all those fancy techniques. The musical choices were interesting as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, ever part of this was very short and was basically just a wierd loop with music attached to it. Really no storylines, which is what makes movies good.

Mr-Emmet responds:

hey, heres a thought, go make flash, soundboards aren't impressive

[The Lazy Generation]

Enjoyable

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music to this, it seems to be good music to center a basically random flash around. I liked most of the animations and this shows some of your graphical talent. Some of it was funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I don't really like about this was how you added regular pictures to this, it really didn't help the movie flow and looked crappy overall.

The-Joker-xD responds:

OMG!!1 thanks for reviewing all my movies!!

[Final Card]

Silly.

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was a pretty humorous movie. The way you animated the guy's eyes looked pretty funny and made him look like he'd been playing the game for a few weeks straight. The storyline was funny, a new concept, and the end was random, but still gave me a laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
The one thing that I didn't like was some of the animations. For example, when you changed camera angles, you just did some free transforming and rotated some stuff, which looked really lame.

The-Joker-xD responds:

OMG!!! Thanks for reviewing all my movies!! xD!

[Hortencate]

Neat...

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were definitely the strongest points in this movie. The drawings were very good and the animations were pretty smooth as well. I liked the music. I can't place the first song, I'm thinking it's era(nostalmix)? Anyway, the music was good throughout the entire movie. The whole movie was real abstract, but I thought most of it was pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
The thing about abstract things that I don't like is that they usually go on and on and get boring after a while. This one didn't fail that.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

yes, Era is one of my most favorite songs.

[The Consult]

Strange but ok.

^^Good Points^^
I think the graphics were the best part of this movie. I liked how you made the beginning look like it was on a computer. The animations and blood actually looked pretty good. The storyline was a little weird but I liked it overall. I also thought there were some ironic and funny things to it, like how the man was killed by a wierd plunger gun.

^^Needs Improving^^
The wierdness to it has its drawbacks as well. I didn't really understand why this guy started killing people with his mouse. Explain if you could.

The-Joker-xD responds:

(i don't know english too good, but i will try to answer)
the movie is a little weird you know, and the why of a person killing with a mouse was by a error in the swf... (that is weird you know xD) Like everything that part is weird and is part of the madness... THX for the review

[Thinkcomix Dead n Alive1]

Err...ok...

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were nice as this always is, and the interface is well made and is appealing visually as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was dismayed to find that this one didn't have an interactive section, which is really why I like the other ones, and this also didn't have much animation at all. It felt a lot like a regular still frame comic. The storyline was also a little weird. A girl gets dirt thrown on her, then the old lady's plants fall on her? what?

Thinkcomix responds:

Firstly, all your comments are appreciated (good or bad).
We try to make the comics "short and sharp" type but however it seems a little bit too short and too simple like most of you mentioned.
Will make improvements!