FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Happy Happy]

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting movie. I liked most of the storyline in this one, especially everything up to the end. The music complimented the eerie and sad mood of the whole thing, and you did a decent job on drawings and animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending was entirely crappy. The bitmap of the truck looked very bad and it looked like you really rushed the end of this. I was disappointed.

Salone responds:

This whole animation was rushed.

It was my intention from the start to make that truck look like something ripped from the Google image search. Even the bicycle at the beginning was supposed to be like that. But I'm glad that you found positive things from this movie and bothered to point them out.

[Dockatar: The random guy]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good. The graphics were surprisingly good. You had some good three dimensional effects in this, and the storyline was kind of interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound wasn't that good. The Speakonia was really low and hard to hear at some points, so you could have made subtitles or made it more audible.

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IZSBHR responds:

OK, thanks (:

[car and driveway]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually thought that this was a pretty good movie. The storyline was pretty good, and your characters were well acted and had some personality to them. There was a good amount of humor in this, which I found quite enjoyable.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics really bring this down. You should use more subtle gradients and just work on the drawings to make them more realistic and detailed.

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crowdedheadspace responds:

thanks and i will keep improving

[Spyware: Official Trailer]

K

^^Good Points^^
This definitely looks like it will be an interesting movie when it is actually released. The graphics are very carefully made and you did a pretty cool job on the storyline. Definitely unique and something new that NG hasn't seen.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voices were a little hard to hear over the music, but that's all.

Chag responds:

Thanks ^^ I found myself doing alot of frame by frame work by the end <_< a bit of a mixture of different styles =P

And as stated in a previous response, the music and audio were in the same track so I couldnt edit them from each other. Something to be aware of in the final piece.

[The Duders: Evolution]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics are slightly better in this episode. Decent voice acting as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A whole episode dedicated to the slight improvement of the graphics? I'm not sure they are even a whole lot different, but whatever. I wasn't too entertained by this for that reason, I think you should have worked a little more and had an actual storyline.

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TheCriminalDuder responds:

Yeah this didn't have a storyline at all really. Shorts really are just about randomness I think. This flash was more of a experiment to see how flash pro 8 works for me I think.