FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr. Toast: Episode 01]

AH!

^^Good Points^^
I wasn't expecting much from this movie from its score, but I actually thought it was a pretty decent movie. The story was a little random, but that made this pretty funny. The music also added to the humor. I like your characters and the ending was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Though I say the end is funny, this could use an ending that wraps something up or atleast makes some more sense.

Hoogiman responds:

Yay, you thought it was decent. :)

[LL- Praise Allah!]

Pretty lame

^^Good Points^^
The only part I really liked about this collab was Lock's part. The Wierd Al music was a good choice, and the animation was kind of funny, as well as the voice over.

^^Needs Improving^^
The first two parts weren't that good, especially part one. I also would have liked a menu button on all three parts of this. The menu is also very bland. And the title is misleading. Man did I think this would be funny...

ClockLock responds:

Ah well, it was all done in one night. Thanks for the constructive critique though.

[Service Announcement 2]

Meh

^^Good Points^^
Good animations and drawings in this as well. I all the different images and texts you used in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's a little too much like the first SA, which I didn't like at all. This didn't really say a whole lot compared to the first episode and I found it just too repetitive and a makes you seem like a huge elitist.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

--Good Points--
Great wording and confidence. For a moment you had me thinking that you knew what you were talking about.

--Needs Improving--
I wouldn't have restated the obvious if a certain "some people" would've got it the first time around. Don't call me "elitist" when i don't even know what the word means. I'm italian, not stupid.

[Service Announcement]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
Good effort on your part to make a movie that will let off some steam and also educate the public. I found this pretty funny and most of the stuff you said is true. The drawings and animations were pretty good, and your use of pieces of the site is very good. Voice overs were great as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This reminded me too much of Foamy. :s

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Once again, voice overs are mine. I like originality to the max whenever it can be used.

Unfortunately some people take me the wrong way and reckon that i'm trying to imitate Foamy the Squirrel... Seriously, where IS the resemblance? I don't have the same voice pitch, i'm not pagan, i'm a rat, not a squirrel and i don't address peope as "your lord and master". It's getting annoying having to explain myself over and over again, so please stop bringing up the same point over and over again. My voice can't be changed.

Thanks for the rest of the feedback, though.

[Behind the Magic]

Very good.

^^Good Points^^
I always like creative and original things, and this was very much of both. The voice overs were good choices and were both very clear. The script was very creative and funny. I got a good laugh out of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this moved too slowly to hear or read what was being said.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

I like my movies slick and fast. I added subtitles for the sole purpose of making understanding just a tad easier.

The voice overs were actually mine. All sound i use are usually made by me (core sounds anyway, like introductory instrumentals, sound effects, music, etc). SOMETIMES i use other people's audio (Most famous example up to date: Denvish's "Going Down to Newgrounds" song).

Anyway, thanks for the feedback.

[Night of Fire Collab]

F'n awesome.

^^Good Points^^
I thoroughly enjoyed watching this collab and really appreciate the work that you put into it for it is one of the best collabs I've seen on NG in a long while. Each part had a lot of effort put into it graphically and in terms of style. This made me laugh hella lots and the music was awesome. The menu was great with the scene select and the author bios.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like was that if you picked a scene to play from the scene selection, you don't go back to the menu after that section. That would be a nice touch.

Starberry responds:

sorry the way i put the parts together would not allow that last thing you mentioned unless i was more knowledgeable in actionscript which i am not

[Star Day : Jack Nicholson]

humorous

^^Good Points^^
This made me smile. The boy's face that you used was pretty funny and the dancing scene was very funny in the way that it was poorly animated and what not. Music was also awesome.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't very good in the fact that there wasn't a whole lot of work put into it. The graphics were very evident of this and it was a little too simplistic for me.

JackNicholson responds:

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[Star Day 2006: Collab #2]

Half good

^^Good Points^^
Astropuff's part in this collab was the half of this that was good. The graphics in that were pretty well done and I thought it was funny how Kirby turned into a can of Spam. A little random but I like it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Roymasta's part was not that great. It was hard to see what the heck was going on because it was poorly drawn. From what I think went on, this wouldn't have been half bad if it were drawn so that one could actually see what was going on.

StarDayCollabs06 responds:

well i have to give you credit on this review, it was better than the last.

[Star Day 2006:davidmoore0]

This is one of the worst.

^^Good Points^^
The intro part was pretty nice, though it could have stood to be a little bit shorter.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I didn't find any part of this collab to be particularly good. Or even half decent. This collab was pretty pathetic and doesn't serve much purpose. I don't know if anyone will ever get pleasure out of watching this. This is one of the worst collabs I have ever seen, and believe me, I've seen my fair share of bad collabs.

David responds:

^^Thanks^^