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[Bobbles]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely an unexpected ending to this short. The animation was pretty well done, and overall the graphics were very clear cut and defined. Liked the sound effects and music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending was interesting, but it was still disappointing. I thought that you would have done a whole song and kept adding more bobbles to the scene.

sysrq868 responds:

I was originally going to add more bobbles, but firstly, the song did more of that same synth line that the bobbles were dancing to before they died now a couple of more times. I didn't see why they should've stopped dancing like that all of a sudden, but then again, to repeat that same dance move would've been just boring.

People do seem to like this short though, so maybe you'll see longer submissions with bobbles in the future, who knows!

Thanks for the review!
-- sysrq868

[Python's Hand Grenade!]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the sound clip was pretty funny. It was funny how it dragged on with the counting to three.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics and animation in this wasn't that good. You pretty much just drew whatever the word being said was. It would have been better with some characters, maybe including the guy making the speech.

unholymoose responds:

Yeah iam pritty new at flash and ill take you idea in to fluition!

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
The loading screen was pretty cool. Better graphics, with the backgrounds added in this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not saying short is necessarily bad, and I like movies shorter than longer, but there is a point where it really takes away from the movie. In this I really thought you should have added a few more stunts and made this a little bit longer.

Jimtopia responds:

This cartoon was either really funny, or really dumb. I tried my hardest to make this really funny, but to certain people it may just seem dumb. Glad you liked the pre-loader though. Just remember, this is a short because I don't want it to take away to much time from bigger projects I'm working on.

[BBQish Ackbar!]

K

^^Good Points^^
I knew these two would meet up at one point. I thought the encounter was pretty humorous. Fart jokes spread at random points throughout, comical graphics, and a neat storyline overall. The ending was pretty funny too. Didn't expect them to get that involved :o

^^Needs Improving^^
Did you use the BBQ and Akbar packs? I can't tell, but they look a little bit odd.

RSQViper responds:

Packs? Heck, no. I made these bad boys from scratch. Ackbar is the same, but bbq is definitely from different pieces and he had no hat.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the movie and found it funny. It was a quick one I found humerous. =)

Thanks for reviewing!

[dickheads guide 1#]

K

^^Good Points^^
I found how you made this look like an old time movie rather amusing. Some of the things you said made me laugh as well, like Mr. ImSoGay.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty poor. Your drawings should have been colored in to make them look better at least.

73h-PwN-f15h responds:

hehe thnx ^^ and yeah i know it needs improving but u know...an old movie would look kinda silly with colors ;P but anyway yeah im making some flashes with better graphics from now on. just needed 2 do two of them fast because i had limited time ^^
thnx for review

[Road Trip - Washington]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline wasn't too bad. I liked some of the script in this, it wasn't too bad. Also, a decent job on the voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
At first it was very confusing. The whole scene didn't look like an RV at all. I understand you got better by the end, but the difference is way too obvious. Your characters don't even look the same in the two minute span.

InfinateLoop responds:

Yeah, next episode will have more consistency.

[Big Pussy]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good graphics. Your drawings were very detailed and had a nice bit of quality to them. The joke was kind of funny and unexpected at the same time.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really don't like how it loops over and over. You should have added a preloader or at least some kind of replay button.

Royaledis responds:

y would i want to give you a choice to watch it again? just watch it again beeyotch!