FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brokeback Pokémon]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty sweet movie, and nice and short. I really liked the clip from the show that you used, and the way you animated and looped it made it look realistic in my eyes. Funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
It had no clocks in it, which I found most disappointing.

PirateClock responds:

it had a strawberry sitting in a tank!

[Chronicles of Chaos1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie. Your animations are very smooth, and if you didn't use tweens as you say, that's pretty impressive. Nice blood animations as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just random violence. No storyline other than don't mess with drunk drivers, which doesn't make much sense to me. Add a storyline and try to zoom into your scenes a bit more. Makes it more interesting.

iPWNd responds:

Hmm, I just turned 15 when I did this animation. I look back at it and I have some serious improvements and more of a logical out-look on animations than just pointless violence. I respect your review and score on this one, but for a more updated point of view of my animation skill look at a more recent one ;)

Chargin' mah razor

[Boldly Going Nowhere]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, a movie made completely by you, even the music. Very cool and a very commendable effort on your part. It made me smile to watch this. Pretty good drawings and the lyrics were funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
In parts the song sounded a bit disjointed, as if you messed up in parts or were just improvising or something. Maybe just some more practice before you actually record.

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Timsplosion responds:

Yeh, thanks. This one is 100% made by me, and I don't know about anyone else but I feel this is one of my best flash works to date graphics wise. But unfortunatley that's not reflected in the score. :P Well, the song may have been a bit undercooked, but it still did the job I wanted it to.

[Subtle+Dynamic]

K

^^Good Points^^
You definitely got me interested. Hot purple chicks laying naked on tree branches. I can't see what can make a better movie. Very smooth and life-like animation, with cool music to go along with it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would like to see a full length movie from you. This was entertaining, but still you could make pretty good movies if you applied yourself.

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NionKokesu responds:

Thank you very much for the review! School, unfortunately, doesn't tend to give enough time to make assignments very long until you get the senior classes. I'll be uploading another (short) project soon and I'm working on a longer one, but I've put it on hold because I've got a job doing Flash stuff for a pretty big company, so my own stuff gets put on the back burner for now.

Once again, thank you very much for your review! I hope you view and enjoy my work in the future.

[-screwdriver-]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty cool movie in terms of the graphics. The black/white objects overlapping each other created a pretty cool effect, and overall the animations were smooth and interesting to watch. The music complimented this nicely.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just seems a little scattered to me. Not really a theme to anything in here, just random animations.

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possibly-yodd responds:

If I could think of an idea I would get a plotline, but I suck right now :3.

Thanks.

[Screwdriver Meets Himself]

K

^^Good Points^^
It started out to look interesting. The drawings were good. Granted, it didn't make much sense what was going on, but I would have still been entertained by it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole ending was kind of lame. Stuff like that with loud noises just doesn't appeal to me. I think you could have made something good out of this.

ScrewdriverClock responds:

Well of course,if I had spent more than 20 minutes on this it could of been great, but I didn't, because i made this what i wanted it to be. The point of this, like i said before is that two realities of oneself cannot meet, thus resulting in this.

[Axe vs Line]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty smooth. Some cool FBF action and nice coloring of the different items throughout. Nice sound effects as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lack of storyline really hurt this. I just couldn't get interested in it just seeing a random ax fighting a line.

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ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review! ^_^