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[FbF Attack]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This definitely shows that you have a lot of skill in FBF animation. Every part of this was extremely smooth and extremely well animated to look like a realistic animation. Also a lot of detail in the drawings, which was surprising, seeing how this was FBF animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really much I can say. You should give your work at a longer movie with a more involved storyline.

Review Request Club

Soupcat responds:

Thanks! I didn't know it was THAT smooth.

Okay, I did. =p
Well my motto while animating is and always will be "It's the details that count"
Something I found out in the beginning, and I will stick to this for the rest of my life.

It's nice to hear that there isn't much room for improving, besides the plot issue.
Been discussed in previous reviews ^^
Again, I know this, and I'm working on this, thanks for the commentary, it shows how deeply this is needed on NG.

I actually started this out of the blue, just drawing shit, not knowing where I was going. And then I got this little idea, and built it up.
Anyway, again, thanks! I love your club, and I will contribute when I find some spare time ^^

<3.

[Luis or jonthompson?]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hehe, I liked this movie, it was pretty funny. I liked the way you built this up with the music, and asking for a response from one of them is just a funny way to go out on this movie. Very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some things went a little too fast for me to read, like the opening paragraph and the post that you showed from the topic in question.

possibly-yodd responds:

Should maybe have left more frames.

Well, I made it quickly. thanks for the review.

[Luis At The Theaters.]

K

^^Good Points^^
The voice acting was pretty good. I thought for the most part this was enjoyable to listen to, as they both said some pretty funny things.

^^Needs Improving^^
I understand you only had half an hour for this, but there was absolutely no animation to supplement this. You should have definitely added something more besides a mostly black screen and a few small shadowy animations.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks for the complimenting my voice acting.

But listen... Don't bitch about the graphics and give me this "needs improvment" crap. I made it quick for nothing more then a quick laugh. When I make something serious then you can tell me what I need to improve. 'Cause if I made something (for example this) just quick and for fun. Then of course I'm not gonna go all out or even be serious on it.

[BBQ-Town 2500]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty sweet movie, haven't seen anything by you in a while, and this was a neat thing to put up. You've come a long way in the way of making movies. This had a great storyline with very funny characters. I especially liked the hotdog men. By the way, what the hell was the boss guy supposed to be?

^^Needs Improving^^
Fart joke too obvious.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Fart joke too obvious?

Awwwww noo it wasnt. :D

[Fjernsyn]

K

^^Good Points^^
The artistic skill you have is obvious. You have a very realistic style of drawing and coloring, especially with the animations of people and also shading. Parts of this were pretty funny, though for the most part I was bored.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I just said, it was a little boring. I'm a bit disappointed that it's mostly just random scenes that are unrelated. The scenes were also very long, which I don't think works well with a bunch of random scenes.

Comlock responds:

Thanks=)
I'll keep that crit in mind for later toons.

(and yes, it's random. I warned people about it in the "Author's comments" ^_^)

[FF: Battle for Newgrounds]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually liked the music, unlike whoever decided to yell "shut off that music", which kind of ruined it. Seems like a good idea, but still needs a lot of work.

^^Needs Improving^^
Mostly, this was just boring to me. It was really hard to watch it to the end. I don't see how a Shoop and a Chocobo are part of the downfall of NG, which didn't make much sense to me. Needs more excitement, and definitely too long for what was offered.

Paradox responds:

I think the only bit which really dragged is the final boss where it kind of takes ages before it dies, but I have to agree, there was too much talking and not enough battling.

I actually like the Shoop fad, it was just the first fad which came into my head, and since it was mainly about fads being the downfall of NG, which anyone can agree is true. Apart from Shoop and that delightful Magikarp.

Thanks for the review.