FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clock Wrogn]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think yodd was right on when he said this is one of the best PW movies on NG, as most of them are incredibly unoriginal, but this one was much more interesting and pretty original at the same time. My favorite scenes had to be the first one with Rupee dancing to Moskau, and also, loved the scene with IIDX Clock (which I never knew existed, but is really awesome because IIDX is a really cool game).

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't really like the scenes with the sound clips that you didn't make yourself. They brought down this array of original speakonia conversations.

KKyuubi responds:

About the mixed bag: I wanted this to be as close to the original idea of PW as possible, but the only way I could make this a "true" Clock movie, was to throw in some inside jokes (like Heavy Metal's insult line).

Also, there's hidden commentary too!

[Minefield I]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline is developing in this episode, which is cool. It is a pretty interesting story. Not the best, but still worth watching. The sound effects and music were good throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
Basically what I said about the last episode. You need to add some more to this graphically. You should definitely draw some more backgrounds to make up for the pretty poor animations and drawings.

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Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks.

[Minefield]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the storyline doesn't seem to be too bad. Seems like if you have some good ideas it could have some decent events in it. The sound effects are good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This needs a lot of work graphically. Your drawings are very poor, and the animations are lacking a lot. You need to do some more detailed animations that are more realistic. Also, work on drawing some backgrounds to make up for this a little bit.

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks!

[Luis is an Animator...]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphics were pretty good. I like the sketchy, artsy type drawings in this. An interesting submission.

^^Needs Improving^^
I couldn't hear a lot of the lyrics in this, possibly because they were just sung too low to really hear well. I didn't know at all what was going on in this movie.

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LuckyLollipopLad responds:

Cheers man!

I guess I should've boosted all the volumes. Or maybe you could boost the volume on your speakers?

Lyrics:
Luis is an animator
Who often gets the Newgrounds Daily Feature.
His animations are so pimp.
It seems to be a true passion!

But Luis...
Where's Murray the Monkey?
Please don't let him die...
You abandoned episode 2 repeatedly
And you almost made me cry.

(You made me cry...)

But today is July the 19th
So eat some cake (CAKE) and brush your teeth (TEETH)
I hope the coming year is good (good...)
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!

[Sherbert the Cat 3-1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A decent addition to the series. The storyline is a little odd and incomplete, but it still has a good feel to it. I will watch the continuation of this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, his legs look like penises. It's not a big deal, but thought I should get it out there. This needs more going on. Some kind of communication for the cat to involve the viewer a bit more.

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Jonimator responds:

HAHAHA! now that you mention it his legs do look like penises. I'll eventually fix that.

[The Snowball Cartoon]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good movie by you. Even the preloader was pretty clever. So far the best I've seen from you graphically. You had animations throughout, even subtle stuff. The music was refreshing, and the storyline had some humor in it, which made this more fun to play.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some more sound effects. If there were any, I didn't hear them because of the music.

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Jimtopia responds:

Yes well, I don't really like this cartoon, but I'm glad you did, thx for the review.

[Jimtopia Changes]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was actually pretty neat for me. It didn't really have the in-your-face comedy that I am used to here on NG, and you had to watch it a little more intently to enjoy it, which was cool. The music and sound effects were cool, and the storyline was original and pretty funny as well. Liked the pillow hands, funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
The movie moves a little slow you could have made it more interesting or a little shorter. Also, the graphics weren't too detailed either, but it doesn't really effect the movie.

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Jimtopia responds:

Woah, a good review, thx! I'm glad you thought it was funny, apparently a lot of people did. *Thinks about re-making it*

-Jimtopia