FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-SFS 6-]

Groan.

^^Good Points^^
The fight is surprisingly pretty well coreographed. There is quite a bit of action and I found the fight mildly entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
Gradients are ugly, especially in the use of faces. You should have used something other than stick figures, or atleast give them some more definition. Also there is no reason for these two to fight, which I really hate in movies. The ending was also very abrupt, it would atleast be nice to see a winner.

slowz responds:

go to #1 then.

[OMG run]

EXPAND NOW!

^^Good Points^^
Immediately when I opened this movie I saw the wonderful preloader. Loved the animation in the preloader and the drawing. The graphics are very impressive, smooth animations and very good drawings. The sound was a good choice and it's pretty entertaining to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seeing this little piece of flash, I want more. I want you to make this into a full length movie, I'm sure if it had a good storyline, it would go damn far. Good luck in the future.

joemama413 responds:

I'm always getting that. I'll try for full length next time. Thanks for the nice comments and helpful insight

[Android X-19]

A worthwhile movie!

^^Good Points^^
In this movie I see some of the best graphics I have seen lately in any flash movie. The shading is superior and drawings are bar none. The sound was also a strong point. The sound effects were defined and the music went well with the mood of the storyline. The storyline itself was flawed but still very good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie developed way too slowly for my tastes. In the beginning I even started to lose interest and it didn't get good until the very end.

Creative-Brain responds:

yeah you are right well maybe next time i'll do better thank you.

[¥Chazerkstarn]

Better.

^^Good Points^^
This installment to the series is definitely better than the last, but mainly because of one reason only. That reason is the use of that weird looking old lady and her asking to look at her knits. Quite funny. Oh and her tone in speakonia is perfect.

^^Needs Improvement^^
I'm disappointed how the speakonia now doesn't even sound anything like what the text says, this is just annoying. Like I said in my review of the last part of this series, give it a rest.

smackhouse responds:

no

[NewbieScape 4 Members]

Another good episode

^^Good Points^^
It's funny, I was just thinking about this series the other day thinking if you were every going to put out a new episode, and today here it is sitting in the portal. The voice overs and script are entertaining as always. I found the picture of zezima to be quite funny and all the scamming parts. This was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are really the only part in this movie that people may find unattractive. I know it is the style of the series, but there could really be some adjustments.

Lopaxe responds:

yes, i really need improvement, but i wont dom it better =p i am a graphic loser, all i got is ideas and bugs. yes, all sorta bugs. thx for review!

[Lets Play Some Tetris]

Very nice!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see. Though you say you can't draw, I found your drawings to be quite well done. I liked how you drew the characters, but other parts, like the tree could use a little work. I liked the animations too, very smooth and well synced with the music at the end. The sudden addition of sound at the end was just great, loved it. The storyline was great as well and I guess this had a good moral.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said above, certain parts of the graphics weren't too great, and sound in the beginning would have made the flash a lot more interesting.

UrbanNinja06 responds:

yeah i cant draw... I had a graphics tablet when i drew the characters and then i got OS X and the tablet software messed up and wouldnt work so the rest was drawn with the mouse... dam technology

[¥Sloveeier]

Not your best work.

^^Good Points^^
The graphics...they were good in certain ways, but not good enough for a score higher than four. For example, I like the definition in the graphics. I also like the voices. Well done and original, though I don't really like the british type accent.

^^Needs Improving^^
This series, though short, has sort of reached its end already. This definitely wasn't the best one in the series. If you are going to continue this series, please atleast have some variety and make some differences in the movies besides one character and a few words.

smackhouse responds:

Im always open to critisism just not right now.

[GG - Duals ? Collection 1]

Not one of the GG's better collabs.

^^Good Points^^
Like most of these simple GG collabs, I'm not much of a fan, so can't say a whole lot good about them. I liked the dancing hiter part of it, that was pretty well animated and quite funny. I liked how you made the menu too, it is pretty original and looks cool.

^^Needs Improvement^^
Each part of the collab is extremely short. In fact one of them has no animation at all in it, which is something I hate in collabs. Another thing you shouldn't do is have three sections focusing on this father Hernandez guy, it doesn't add much variety to the collab.

Dual-Glock responds:

Well, I'm inclined to agree with you :)
Thats for watching and taking the time to review, it is much appreciated! :D