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[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 3]

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^^Good Points^^
It was a funny play on words. Provided a minute of entertainment and a good joke on the end of it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...I'm not really getting much out of this. I know it's a short, but really if you want to make shorts that people will like, they need to be explosive and have something really funny that people will lol at. This is just a joke.

Jimtopia responds:

I suppose you're right.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 025]

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^^Good Points^^
Actually first time I've really watched one of these. I like how it is really reminiscent of the old series, which was brilliant. Thought it was cool how Hitler was made to look like the Pokemon itself. Overall looks like a great series developing here.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'd appreciate it if you would compress the audio or something. It's a bit annoying having to load almost 5 MB to essentially watch one frame.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

No way.

[Stick and Stick Episode 6]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely the best in the series so far. It was much longer than any episode, except for the previous one, but that one doesn't count. It was quite funny too. Very random humor and very random characters, but I really think the quick pace and randomness really made it a great episode. Loved it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I tend to be able to read this stuff pretty fast, but this was just a little bit too quick for me at some points. I missed a bit.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Wow, great review. I'm so glad that I have a fan for this work. To tell you the truth, this series is more of a practice flash. After I'm done with this series. I'll start with some serious flash.

Yeah, I know, as always, It always seems to go to fast in some parts. But really, I'll fix it in the future. Thanks.

[Stick and Stick Episode 5]

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^^Good Points^^
I like the new idea of this Flash. I kind of liked the old random and playful style of the other episodes, but this wasn't too bad either. It was neat how you drew many different pictures to illustrate the storyline in the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sync was a bit annoying, though I know just as well as anyone how odd Flash can be when it comes to sound syncing up, so I don't blame ya much.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Yeah, thanks for the input. And yeah, I drew a lot, but I finally figured when I played the music. It wasn't syncing at all...

Dang.

Be sure to the next episode later.

[Stick and Stick Episode 4]

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^^Good Points^^
I think the best show so far for this series. It seems as if you put a bit more time into the drawings and making them look a little less sloppy. Definitely a pretty humorous storyline, hopefully you continue this series.

^^Needs Improving^^
Reverted back to the old white background again, which I don't really like. Also, I wasn't a fan of the soundtrack in this one. The music was a really odd song...sounded like two songs playing at once.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Ah, thanks for the part that this was the best one yet, because I really think so it is. Didn't like the soundtrack? Aw, oh well. I'll use some better music next time. I'm really glad you liked the storyline. And also the song where it shows the stick and stick is messed up. I couldn't fix it, so I left it like that.

I just know you loved the ending though.