FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bbq-ish quest]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was pleasantly surprised not to find much scat humor in here, which seemed to be a growing trend in your movies. I liked the fat guy at the end, it was unexpected and quite funny. The voice overs were very funny too, so casual, yet so epic. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too bad you didn't really give this a very good ending. It was very open ended. Perhaps a sequel is in order?

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Perhaps.

[Old vs New Zelda]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the music throughout this movie. You had some good Zelda remixes that of course if the theme of the movie. Some of the jokes were kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were really terrible on this. Spend a lot more time on drawings. Your arrows were just crooked white lines, not even straight ones! The animations were pretty bad too. Dieing was basically just cutting a sprite in half. This doesn't really follow a great path either with the different events you have in this. Not really what I was expecting.

RyuXKen responds:

can u help me work on this?

[Genocide Inc. Episode 01]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok the storyline in this movie was pretty good. I like how you put in a bunch of pictures of certain stuff you were talking about, like the dead rat and the hand signals. Some of the music choices were good, basically everything aside from Jungle Boogie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this movie were really quite boring. You used the same simple animations over and over again.

Blaklyon responds:

I agree with you in every area you point out but remember, I this was the first flash animation I ever did. If you watch my later works, you will see where I inproved on some stuff. I was thinking about redoing this animation with better sound and better graphics. Thanks for the review!

[Dailytoon #238]

K

^^Good Points^^
This seems to be the daily toon that no one likes, so of course it is one that I actually found pretty good. All parts of this were good in their own way. I liked the music in Retrosmash's part and TPOTEOZ's, Fwenchmaid's and Cruzh's parts were all very funny. I liked the toof parodies in this, and wade's voice was just hilarious, as was the animation of his mouth. Funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the loud barney bunch style fart in Cruzh's part of this, and TPOTEOZ's part was just a little too long and was very hard to hear.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

hehe well glad you liked it

["Turd of the Week"]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very true movie you made. I'm not a fan of these movies, so any satire against them is cool by me. I liked the many sound effects you put into this, they were great and the directions were kind of funny, like "the furrier the better!" was humorous. Overall, good job, and it needed to be said in a professional manner like this.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would have been a lot funnier if you had read off the instructions in some kind of jerky-type voice over and maybe added some more harsh comments about the series, but still well done.

KKyuubi responds:

I was trying to get this done ASAP, so there may have been some things I left out, but in the special Clock Day edition I happen to be planning, it will be narrated by StrawberryClock.

[Gost Restaurants: IN 3D!;]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually found this to be pretty entertaining. I thought it was funny how you made fun of ozcar many times throughout this movie and when you used him as taco sauce. The different images you used were hilarious, and I especially liked some of the drawings you used on the special sandwich. Good stuff, and the description to this movie is the best part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, everything that is bad in this just kidn of makes it funnier.

Starberry responds:

ssssssssssssh dont say that one word of that one guy's name

[mythos medly]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings you made in this weren't too bad. Atleast I could tell what you were drawing and they weren't just cropped images from google or anything. The music wasn't bad. And for some reason, the many colors are almost hypnotic.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations are not very smooth, it's quite obvious that you should, if you ever revise this, increase the framerate and add a few more frames in between. This also seemed quite repetitive, mainly because you used the same images over and over and just changed colors or something. You shouldn't have used image backgrounds either, it just looks crappy.

heather-lanham responds:

yes, i'm changing the backgrounds, re-vamping and defineing the animations, and i'll re-submit later on.

[Newgrounds: The Future]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you used the same music from the Audio portal. That made this almost sound kind of epic to me. The ending was kind of cool..."only time will tell". The webcam part was kind of random, but interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you said it best, this isn't really interesting at all. I guess I shouldn't have expected it not to be very good, since you said it wasn't very good. And why must you always tag along with onnet?

Paradox responds:

Tag along with Onnet? What?

[Bbq-ish 100th movie]

Ok

^^Good Points^^
First off, congrats on getting 100 submissions with this one. The fuzzy graphics are neat as always. Nice voice overs and sound effects too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the farting joke is getting kind of old. I was really expecting you to have some different joke in this, but nonetheless, you still used it. Not very interesting.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

But,then again fart jokes are pure part of bbqbeefburgerman movies,THOUGH i could vary them a little.

Thanks anyhow.

[Newgrounds' gonna Change!]

K

^^Good Points^^
This made me laugh. Not only is it a great NG history lesson, but it's a humorous preview of what is to come. I liked the drawings you did, especially Tom and the animations were cool too. Cool idea and nice way you presented it to NG.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could have used some more sound effects to spice it up a little bit.

TheSoulMan responds:

Thanks!

But I wanted to leave the song like that :P