FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The everyday life of ZIM]

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^^Good Points^^
Well this was just amazing. I really liked the graphics. They looked like the show, which I have never seen, but still they were charming. Pretty funny scenarios here. A pretty crazy daily life this ZIM fellow has.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...Can't really think of anything. Quite enjoyable. Nice job.

IZSBHR responds:

Thanks :D

[Dear Grandpa]

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Honestly this was not that interesting. The music and sound effects went well with this, I suppose, and the premise is kind of cute. However, it's really a boring movie. As you said, not really designed for the NG community at all. Really don't like this that much, as the animation is just the writing. Could have done something more interesting with this.

RichArt responds:

you are right, i only posted it here to see how it would go on newgrounds, however against all odds, it passed. i was sure it would be blamed, cause its not very intresting, especially cause its in dutch. i can only conclude newgrounds visitors are a odd bread, if you make something with explosions and death, they like it, if you make something with mario(DOESN"T MATTER WHAT:( ) they like it.

and now, i gess i can add to that, that if you trow some collors in it, maybe say that it's dutch, they like it.

[The IRK show #1!!!!]

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^^Good Points^^
Doesn't look too bad of a start for a new series to me. The graphics were just my style, good enough to know what you are looking at, but still pretty crappy, but in a funny way. I think this was somewhat entertaining. Can't wait for the next episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
The audio quality in the beginning song was really low. I kept getting static during it, and it was kind of annoying.

Imacowdock responds:

I got static also. Which is wierd because I got static in "The Causes" aswell. It must be the settings im exporting my audio as.

[NG conspiracy: View Gems!]

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^^Good Points^^
I can't believe that you actually made a submission about the gems. I didn't realize you were missing them that much. It guess it was a good way of getting your message out however, as the topic didn't seem to get much of a response from the people of NG.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have put some background music in. Just something soft to fill the empty parts of this movie, especially in the intro. Also, I didn't see a link to the topic in there, maybe that would have been a good idea.

IZSBHR responds:

If you right click, a link pops up.

[ClockDay Is Saved]

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^^Good Points^^
An excellent clock day movie. Can't believe I haven't seen it until today. Guess I should have checked the collection earlier. The graphics were definitely very impressive. The detail in the drawings were top notch, and I really liked the nuclear explosion effect. The ending was kind of sad, though ironic at the same time, which made it funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think some parts were a little drawn out, like him running through the streets. Just got a little boring.

Creatus responds:

Its perfect. Don't lie.

[Zombie Wasteland part ONE]

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^^Good Points^^
Fairly well made. I'm not a fan of zombie movies, but this one was actually pretty good, since it was well-presented, and leaves room for a sequel. In fact, this was more of a trailer, but still good. The music went well with the emotion that was felt from the voice acting. Set a sad mood, and makes me want to watch a second part.

^^Needs Improving^^
The art could use some improving. Learn to use some shading effects in order to make the characters appear more realistic. As I said, I would have called this more of a trailer, as that is what it really seems to me. It started and ended, and had the imagery that I would expect to see while sitting in a movie theater.

SCUD14 responds:

thanks for that! More and more people have been relating this flash to a trailer, so i guess thats what it is =D. I wil lwork on shading for the next part, mainly because thatll be mostly fbf, wheras this one was symbols as characters.