FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LL-teh Circus]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely one of the better movies I've seen from you thus far. The graphics were very typical of you, which is a great thing, I'd say. As always, excellent shading, good subtle animations like in their faces, and detailed drawings. The storyline really made this interesting of course, though. There was a lot of humor in this. The acts were hilarious, my favorite was Golden's flipping. Trash's unpreparedness was rather funny too. I liked this movie, another good one from you.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing specific that I can think of that I haven't said about some of your other movies as well.

Courgy responds:

Hehe thanks, luckely I feel like I have the lacks I had in this movie fixed in my later movies.

[LL-Stranded]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another good LL movie from you. This one had your style of graphics, so of course they were pretty well done. Thorough shading, smooth animations, and good background drawings. The speakonia was all clear, and the script itself had lots of random humor added in, which started at the beginning and didn't falter at all throughout the movie. I really wasn't expecting that ending either, so nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Once again, in future movies, you need some more camera movement, which is easily done with V-cam. You could zoom in on characters, pan, and what not, and it would make your movies a lot cooler.

Courgy responds:

Hehe thanks, this movie was my pride and joy before I got my AS-Cam fla so I wasn't skill-wise ready to do all the fancy cameramovements and all.
But thanks for the cool comments.

[LL short- Break Down]

K

^^Good Points^^
For a quick job on this movie, not too bad at all. The drawings were half decent. Your characters looked pretty nice, and you had good shading and coloring throughout this movie. The storyline wasn't to bad. I thought the ending was pretty clever as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There isn't a whole lot of animation in here. The only thing you really animated consistently was the speech indicator. That made the movie a little boring, since nothing much was happening the whole time.

Courgy responds:

Thanks dude.
I realize it´s a bit dull but I was a lot less animator back then.

[The Clocktopian Massacre]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely a movie to go on my favorite movie list, so congrats on that. This movie was amazing in basically every way possible. There was a ton of random shit going on the whole time, like the first opening sentence, which really set a funny mood throughout the movie. The mood never failed as this movie just got better and better as time went on. I loved the "Overused song" part, it was completely necessary to have a Benny Hill scene in this movie. Also, the pokemon battle scene was very well done, and really quite funny. This movie was awesome, it definitely deserved a daily award of some sort :(.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was gold, man.

Courgy responds:

If I say "I totaly agree"I would seem arogant.

But, I totaly agree.

thanks dood

[LL-Pranks]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty entertaining Lock Legion movie. You've definitely got some graphical talent in this movie. There was shading in every character, and you animated the lock faces all of the time and changed their shapes, which was cool. The jokes and storyline in this were rather humorous as well. "you gook" made me laugh first, and then the prank that commie played was funny, and Water's reaction to that was kind of funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
You focused a lot on the characters, and you didn't do much with the background or anything else. The movie looks a little barren to me. You could add some more to the backgrounds and also some camera movement would make this more interesting.

Courgy responds:

Again, this movie was made just 1 day after Stranded so I didn't own a Cam-fla. And yes I did made sloppy backgrounds for this.

Thanks for the comments, you are luckely one of the fellas that actualy put's thought in reviews.

[Bill Murry The General!]

K

^^Good Points^^
When this first started playing I was pleasantly surprised to hear that song "General" by Dispatch. Has to be one of my favorite songs in my life. You actually started out making a pretty good movie out of this. The Bill Murray general looked pretty funny, and the animations were true to the storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
However, I was then quite disappointed when I saw that the end was a so early, though I was expecting no less. I guess that next scene was kind of humorous, mainly because of the alien Bill Murray you drew.

Sensu-clock responds:

Thanks. Im finishing the rest of it now, this was just so it would be in time for Murry week. The General is one of my favorite songs also.

[Exploding Fungus 2 silent]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was much improved over the first episode, that is for sure. The storyline in this episode actually made some sense, and I could follow what was happening. I was even kind of amused by the storyline, which turned out to be pretty unique and fun to watch. My favorite scene had to be when the bacteria started destroying the mushrooms. It's such a random event! The graphics, though kind of elementary were pretty unique, and actually looked pretty cool. Much better!

^^Needs Improving^^
One thing that really annoyed me about this movie was that you kept changing the text between clickable and not, without warning. Towards the middle, I was looking at a screen of text waiting for it to disappear, but it did not for a while. Only after a minute did I realize that I was supposed to click the text to go on. Also, this could be so enriched with a ton of sound effects. There is so much going on, so much interesting stuff!

Bezman responds:

Glad you liked the plot!

The text was indeed probably my worst design choice ever.

Thanks for the reviews!

[Exploding Fungus (silent)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, this was kind of funny in its own special way. I had no idea what was going on in this movie, which was kind of amusing, and the moral of the story seemed kind of humorous as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are pretty crude. I'm not sure how they stacked up against stuff of the time, since I wasn't into Flash at that time, but I couldn't see this being that great. Everything was really sloppily animated, which made this hard to follow. There was no sound, and surely some funky tune could have made this funnier.

Bezman responds:

You're right - it was bad even then, though worse things were passed.

It's not meant to be confusing - spraycan sprays on mushroom, which explodes. Purple mist moves about.

Maybe I'll do a remake of this one day.

[The Adventure(s) of Snarf]

K

^^Good Points^^
When watched all the way through, this was a very good movie. After the crappy flash scene, this started to get much better and your humor became more creative and a little bit more mature. The graphics were pretty well done, good animations and good drawings too. A very funny storyline in this movie, I am liking these Dock people! Mission accomplished.

^^Needs Improving^^
First impressions are very important. This movie made a terrible one. For some reason in the beginning the animations were much cruder. Also, the bad flash scene was FAR too long. It shouldn't have been more than a few seconds long, as to not bore the audience.

xthesnarfx responds:

I have answers to your needs improving thing. Yeah I know that the finale countdown scene was waaaaay to long. At first I was planning on makeing a skip butten, but it wouldn't work for some odd ressone (im guessing because it was gana skip to something in the same scene). And the ressone that the begging part was really bad was because I started this when I was first getting into flash so I wasn't that good. I picked it back up about 3 weeks later at the line "Was that really nessisary?". I hope you have found your answers.