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^^Good Points^^
Better than the first episode, mainly because it is a bit longer, as you said, almost finished. The music was cool, and I liked the upbeat feeling throughout this. The new parts you added were pretty well done, especially the fight scene with PillowUzi, that was pretty funny.
^^Needs Improving^^
Still, an unfinished project, I don't know why you don't just take a few days to finish it up instead of making another incomplete version. As long as you don't delete any of these I really don't care though.