FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lord of the Bins]

K

^^Good Points^^
This took a while, but it got funny once Orion got into the office. The pizza lamp falling was pretty funny, and that whole conversation was humorous. I liked the voice overs you did too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You do very little animation in this, and when you do they are pretty crude. Work on that part of this. Also, the voice overs in the beginning seem to be very loud to me. You could really decrease the volume, as they almost got me to stop watching this mid-stream.

Toxic-Tears responds:

Thanx 4 ur organized review, milinko959. I expected the flash to be quite boring except for the last part, if u have watched LotR and noticed the 2nd ending. Yup, u can count on me to make a far better flash in future, m8!

[A Cauliflower Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
A parody of BBQ, eh? I actually like it quite better than the actual true BBQ movies, though some of those spinoffs top this. Anyway, the movie was really funny because of the characters. That was like a deer in a box or something? The speakonia sounded pretty funny in this and the farting was absolutely necessary. I wouldn't mind seeing more adventures of this fellow.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess the music may have been a little bit loud compared to the speakonia, but other than that, no specific complaints.

AaroNinja responds:

Actually, it was a donkey with a cardboard box for a head, holding a cheese.

["Phuck Wou" Phoenix Wong]

K

^^Good Points^^
The best part was the music/sound effects. You had running in the 90's which is a good song, and some other funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, I think you already know, but half of this stuff is just taken from YTMND and has nothing to do with Phoenix Wrong. You had the NSMB clip, which had nothing to do with it, and also the ET clip... You also took some YTMND's without recognition. I can't say that this was funny at all, it doesn't look like you put much thought into this.

TommyGun responds:

MAED IN ONE HOUR.
PA-RO-DY

you voted fair so i respect j00!
much love

[Rotting Brains]

K

^^Good Points^^
I don't know man, maybe you have something about your name, but I think anything you make could pass! The music was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not to be mean, but this wasn't that great. The animations were pretty bad, you just rotated and tweened...you didn't even move the arms or legs. This wasn't original either, there are a ton of stick figure obstacles course type things on NG.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the comments; this was my first actual half-decent 'movie' submitted to NG...

Also, I tested that, 'anything I make could pass' theory... for the most part, it's not true. :(

Thanks again!

.frenZy.

[Yellow Mustard]

K

^^Good Points^^
I can't believe you found such an odd song in the audio portal. It's really quite interesting and a great choice to make a Flash movie on.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animating and drawing skills obviously aren't that good, so I felt you didn't do the song much good. The drawings were really plain with no shading or definition at all. I felt a better animator could have really captured the emotion at the end of the song, which you really did not do too well.

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks!

[WWW(animutation)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Animutation has always been something I've enjoyed quite a bit in the Flash community, and this one was a good movie. The music was crazy as all animutation music needs to be. There was lots of funny scenes in this, but my favorite has to go to the baseball fight scene with intermittent Oprah.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not the best animutation mainly because the images weren't cropped to well so there was a lot of whiteness around the edges.

WirelessTaco responds:

Thanks for the review,
Yea I think i did slack off on the cropping I will keep that in mind if I make another.

[Strawberry Flav'd Webcam!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, I thought this movie was pretty darn funny. I first laughed when SBC asked for A/F/L. That was pretty funny, as well as when his mother came in. It is weird how no one ever has SBC's family in a movie. Nice job on making a funny storyline, even though you said you rushed it. I also loved the speakonia tone.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics aren't really that good. You could have used some more outlines for you drawings to make it look better. Also, use normal clock faces.

RSQViper responds:

FOr the graphics, I was trying it without an outline for the first time to see how it looked. I could have done some shading loking back.

As for normal clock faces, I have no idea what you're saying. LOL! I thought they were clock faces.

Thanks for reviewing!

[ZIMMY puppet pals ep. 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty good. Was it from the show? Also, the backgrounds you used weren't that bad, and the rain scene was pretty well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really pretty boring. The animations were really slow and the storyline moved very slow and was really hard to follow, since the animations were mostly just resizing images and tweens. Overall this was really just a boring movie.

Review Request Club.

IZSBHR responds:

Resizing images and tweens? Woah, woah, woah. This was 85.7% fbf, and it WAS 86% until I accidently replaced an fbf with a tween :(

Music = From show
BGs = official art pic from show :)
Rain = All mine :D

Thanks :)