FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bean Adventure]

K

^^Good Points^^
An excellent movie! I really loved the sound effects that you used, like the screaming and such. The graphics were very well done. Great use of the fade effect. The storyline was really funny too. You definitely have a creative imagination to take the human body and turn it into such a funny little movie about a funny little bean. Excellent job.

^^Needs Improving^^
What does this do? Loop at some point? I've never seen a movie do that. If not you should not have repeated everything.

ShotgunFacelift responds:

thanks! i wanted it to loop cause i thought it would be a funny way to show that the bean has to make the journey over and over again. plus its even funnier to see him eat a shitty bean.

[Textual Adventures]

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting concept to use words as characters to your movie. I thought the yu-gi-oh duel was a pretty funny idea too.

^^Needs Improving^^
A good idea, but poorly executed. The sound effects seemed really odd to put in, and you didn't use many sound effects where you could have. Something needs to be done in the beginning to make it more interesting. Music or sound effects or something.

Review Request Club :)

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks!

.frenZy.

[VBNM]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it was mildly funny, the randomness. The music was good too. I like inspector gadget remixes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's a single frame then just a few MC's that are at most ten frames a piece. I can't say I think you put much effort into making this, and it really wasn't entertaining at all to me.

Carbonwater responds:

I put like five minutes of work into this and it survived.
Lol, internet.

[The All American Hamsters]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you edited the music to make it very high pitched. Made the whole hamster thing make a lot more sense. The hamster drawing wasn't too bad either. Looked nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was rather boring. It just zooms in on the little dude and then ends. There really isn't any animation and nothing interesting really happens at all throughout. I'm pretty sure there was no secret either, since I clicked on everything that was a button but nothing happened.

Lisard responds:

click the bottom right hand corner

[Epic Snowball Fight!]

K

^^Good Points^^
A great film for the upcoming winter season. I loved the music. Never heard a remix of that song, but I'm glad I did; it went well with the movie. The graphics were very well done. You had great camera effects and lots of animations. Great job overall. The characters were definitely unique and the ending to this was cute.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really not much. It was a great length I think, don't listen to everyone else.

XxwaSSupxX responds:

Well thank you. I'm not used to detailed reviews. But then again, I'm reviewing these in reverse starting at this one.

And I won't listen to any mean people just because you said that.

Thanks again.
-Nick

[NGC Toon #2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ah, another NGC movie, what a pleasant surprise for this day. I have to say that every part of this collab was enjoyable, and I'm glad that you threw in a game into the mix as well, that is something that I don't see often in collabs. My favorite had to be swif's just for randomness and good graphics. Followed by Big ex, which was very ironic and had unique graphics.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say I really enjoyed Yodd's part since it was just his halloween submission. I would expect such a high profile site and group to be making completely original stuff for a collab.

NGCTOONS responds:

:( you dislike my part. Thanks for the review.

[The Happy Little Buterfly]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this movie were very well done. I really like to give extra points when animations are synced to music, and you did this flawlessly, which I really liked. You really did a good job on this by setting the calm relaxing mood and then ending it quickly with the splattering on the windshield. Pretty neat job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really care that it is short, but I'm sure you will get criticism from other people regarding the length of this movie.

InsidiousTweevle responds:

Yeah, people have complained, but I DID warn them. Incidentally, I'm glad people understand that it's a windshield. A lot of other people I showed it to didn't get it. Thanks.

[BlobCombat.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty average movie overall. The storyline wasn't too bad, it was pretty interesting, and you left an opening for a new episode. The music was pretty cool, and the blood was fairly well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should really increase the framerate, I can tell you set it pretty low. Also, the whole blob idea is really overdone, and your animations weren't spectacular, so that didn't help. You should also add some more sound effects in here. It feels really barren.

Review Request Club.

killergold2 responds:

Yeah, I'm actualy fixing the problem along with working on the third one ;D

[A very DOCKY Halloween]

K

^^Good Points^^
There were some good images in this episode. I like how you drew SBC and some of the other clocks, as well as HLG.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really hard to understand. In fact, I'm sure I only got the bare minimum in order to understand what was going on. I couldn't hear half of the speakonia, and there was too much going on at one time. Also, music with lyrics don't work, it's just distracting. Then towards the end that stupid screaming noise just kept playing over and over. I couldn't wait for this to be over.

IZSBHR responds:

it was quality sound or animation, or not on time.

I chose to do better animation instead of sound :)

[Gear of Metal]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good metal gear parody. I think I will suggest it for the Metal Gear collection. The voice overs were very well done, and the humor was great too. The best part had to be the quadrapalegic guard. Nice job on the animations as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are a little too plain for me. You didn't put much detail into the backgrounds and such, which was disappointing. Also, try to stand a little further from you mic, since there was clearly some noise in there resulting from that.

Leet-Productions responds:

I love quadrapledgic guards;. :D

Thanks lots.