FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Blam-oholic Story]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, at first, I wasn't planning on watching this whole thing, because it wasn't that great at first, but I thought the ending was very witty, which is why I am giving this an 8 instead of a 5 or 6. Very funny how you decided to put Cowell in there as the blam-o-holic's equal.

^^Needs Improving^^
As I said, boring in the beginning. Also, could use some better graphics. The lip syncing doesn't line up at all in the beginning, and there is no shading whatsoever.

[Where do clams come from]

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^^Good Points^^
I thought this was pretty creative. It's a neat concept that this girl was part of the tree and felt its pain. Also, neat how she turned him into a clam. I was wondering where this was going, and then that happened, which was kind of cool. Great graphics, especially the animations, which were very realistic and smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing much for me to say here, it was an excellent submission!

[The monk and the samurai]

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^^Good Points^^
Ok, interesting idea for this movie. I really liked the music, as I felt it went well. The ending was kind of surprising to me, which was good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really sure whether I like this or not. The animations definitely need to be improved. Make them a lot smoother. Maybe some color in this would have helped as well. Also, work on developing the storyline more. Either that or just animate the fight scene so that it is more interesting.

[Toys In The Attic]

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^^Good Points^^
Ok storyline. I guess the ending wasn't so bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just meh to me. It was pretty much boring me throughout the entire movie, and I wasn't really interested to see what happened. Graphics were also equally boring, which didn't help at all. Should have had some backgrounds rather than just plain black.

[Tweeeeeen]

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^^Good Points^^
This was quite hilarious. A funny satire on people using way too many tweens in their movies. I thought you did a good job being satirical in this and had a lot of humor added into it. Very funny intensity in the voice acting too. Great job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing. It serves its purpose, and you really can't improve the graphics, as that is what this movie is about. Good job.

[Dawn Of Devestation]

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^^Good Points^^
Graphics weren't too bad. I think you are better at drawing than animating, seeing how the buildings and objects were drawn very well. Decent job here on the sound effects as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't really keep me occupied or interested. I think one reason was the constant camera view. You should zoom in on fight scenes so that they seem more prominent and important. This would probably help a lot.

[Squidge Rock]

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^^Good Points^^
That was definitely an interesting animation. I liked this Squidge character, and his rocking out. He really had some funny facial expressions. Lots of funny animations here, like when he was frozen in ice. Good stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess you could work on the animations a bit more and make them smoother. Other than that, I guess you accomplished what you were going for here.

[Kurenai X Trailer]

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^^Good Points^^
A fair trailer. It appears that you have some animated and drawing skills, and those two parts about this were the best. Interesting looking characters. I might be interested in seeing the full movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Black backgrounds kind of blended in with the characters sometimes. Also, the music was pretty annoying. Sounded like the same song playing over and over to me. Not much of a storyline here either.

[MGS: True Sneakyness]

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^^Good Points^^
This wasn't too bad. Not sure why it has such a low score. The graphics were pretty good, especially your drawings of Snake, which looked quite accurate and detailed.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't without its flaws though. For one, what was with the ending. Did they kill him or not. When the credits play, he is just hanging above the bad-guys' heads. Overall, a lack of storyline brings this down.

[I Am Cow]

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^^Good Points^^
Well, the song was pretty humorous, I liked that. The sound effects added in weren't too bad either. Pretty funny to watch this, though mostly because of the song.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations were kind of lame. You used the same animations over and over, and you used a lot of ugly looking images from the internet in this too. Definitely try and draw everything next time, and maybe not be so repetitive with the graphics.