FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love your dog.]

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An interesting clip used from Billy Madison and fairly animated. The drawings were pretty neat looking. I enjoyed how you drew your characters, that was pretty unique. And adding some of your own imagery into this to go along with the clip was pretty interesting. I didn't really like how it looped though. Would have been better if it had a replay button instead of automatically playing.

[Boxman vs Ball]

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It is definitely an interesting style. Very sketchy as you said it was. It's not a style used all too often on NG, which makes it pretty unique. It's a bit hard to follow at times I think because of this style though. The fast music went well with this though. Overall a good effort.

[Final-est Fantasy Ep. 2]

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A bit better than the first episode. Finally we are getting some storyline going here. One thing that I didn't like about this episode was how quickly the text went by. I think I read everything but it seemed like I barely had enough time. An extra second would have been better in most spots.

[Final-est Fantasy Ep. 1]

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Well it wasn't too bad. Not much of a storyline, though we get to see a little bit about the characters for the rest of the series. I'm a bit surprised with when this ended. I thought it would be at least a little longer and get into some sort of storyline. Now really what we have to look forward in the next episode is the background changing!

[Final-est Fantasy Ep. 3]

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Not a bad sprite film. I enjoyed the satirical humor, such as "This sword isn't shiny enough to help us". I think you did a fair job drawing out the scenes and mixing them with the sprites. Some sound effects could have definitely made this a bit more interesting though. The music was nice, but it doesn't really cut it in the sound department for me.

[15 Second future teaser]

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Well not much of a teaser here. Just some characters tweened around and such. If you want some tips on how to do sprite animations, do a search for tutorials right here on NG, or perhaps try out the Flash forum if you are having trouble.

pockets08 responds:

- nods -
yes i know it wasnt anything. it wa sa practice. I'm going straight from more Buisness perspective. to entertainment, and joyous views. so, the actual animation perspective is much more detailed. but you gotta start somewhere.

[a love short]

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Short and sweet. I don't see many movies made out of love here on NG, so this is a nice thing to see here, and it's pretty cool that you and your husband share the interest of NG. It was a cute movie, and obviously you're right where you belong here on NG if you see a cock in the sky!

[Chick Habit]

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This was pretty good. I'm surprised it's your first submission over 10 seconds long, as this is quite a bit longer than that. I liked the song...what actually made me watched this at first was that The Flashbulb did a version of this song which I really enjoy. You should check it out if you haven't heard it. Anyway, I feel that this was a good music video. It went well with the lyrics of the song, and you have obvious skill in animating.

[red man walk]

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Not bad animating here. You did a good job cutting up the backgrounds in order to make layers and making the guy look like he was part of the scene itself. It's not a bad animation test, but I like things with a bit more storyline in them. Also, I don't think the music really fit. The track was barely started by the time this ended. A short loop probably would have been better.

Huyu responds:

Thank you very much for your review, i dont like story less flashes either... but i suck at coming up with ideas.