FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mecha/Background test]

(title in work)

Well it is certainly a good test. You've definitely got skill in drawing. Can't really be too sure about your animation since there wasn't much in here, but still probably good. Lots of detail and shading, looks great!

[Die finds a friend]

(title in work)

Eh, I didn't really enjoy this too much. The drawings were really simple, and they didn't look too good. You should really have some shading to give things more character. That being said, this could have also benefited from some better animations. What was there was slow and boring. I died not long into the game, but didn't feel like trying again.

[Ping Pong Papaya]

(title in work)

Well yeah that was pretty bad. It was actually kind of annoying to watch this. There was no storyline, the music didn't really go with anything and really nothing happened. There was no climax or anything. Next time, make a movie that has some sort of storyline to make it more interesting. Or at least better animation.

[Donkey Kong Arcade]

(title in work)

Well you recreated the game fairly well. The sound effects were right on cue, and the graphics and animations were fair as well. The storyline or ending here wasn't very exciting or creative. Just something simple. Really needed some more to make it worthwhile to me.

[Living With Smiley - Ep 1]

(title in work)

Looks like a promising series to me. Good characters, voice acting and jokes. When I first started watching this, it seemed much older than it actually was. I pegged it around 2003, so it looks very old school with all of the subtle gradients and the way the characters are drawn. Overall and enjoyable first episode to this series.

["Quick Death 2"]

(title in work)

Definitely the best death in the entire series in my opinion. It's the most creative, but I can say the same things about this episode as the rest of the series. You have no sound, and this is incredibly short. It would be better if you maybe put a storyline in, or at least a few more deaths.

["Quick Death"]

(title in work)

This wasn't too impressive. You used the same exact clip in the x2 submission of this series, so it was nothing new to me. Again, the animations and drawings are good, but the lack of sound and the length really bring this down in my eyes.

["Quick Death x2"]

(title in work)

Not too bad. The drawings were pretty good, especially the backgrounds, which you detailed and shaded quite nicely. The animations and effects were nicely done, though as you said, sound effects would be nice. This was a bit short really, which I why it would have such a low score.

[The Midnight Snack]

(title in work)

It was a decent halloween movie. Him getting eaten by the fridge was unexpected I'd say, but still it wasn't that interesting or entertaining. The animations were alright, and the sound effects and music went well with this. Just a bit boring for my tastes.

jucama responds:

ok, thank you for the review