FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[why i am the real trae]

(title in work)

I'm not too keen about who exactly traekwon6 is and why people are impersonating him, but in any event this movie was pretty poorly done and needs quite a bit of work. The voice over was kind of a cop out on this, and you really didn't animate much at all.

[Fruity Gloop]

(title in work)

Heh, a miracle product type ad. I really enjoyed it, especially the potpourri joke at the end. The voice acting was probably the low point of this movie, especially in the beginning of this. Sounded a bit too forced to me. Overall though, an interesting and entertaining fake advertisement.

[_Apple_]

(title in work)

That was quite good. The style is like some foreign independent film...or at least that is my opinion of it. The graphics were wonderful. Great drawings, especially the facial expressions of the apple. One thing that I think should have been done further was the end, where you flash to the rotting apple. I think you should have done this a few more times and shown the apple in further rot. I think it would have made the ending more resonant.

Snicp responds:

thank you for feed back,
and yes, i actually tried doing more frames of the rotting apple i made about 4-5
how ever i felt that it would ruin the animation for some reason and made it to only 2

[Devo - Whip It]

(title in work)

Well it does what is promised. It loops and has Whip It. The loop itself was pretty well animated. Though the only tough animation was the guy whipping. This wasn't too interesting to watch, could have definitely used a bit of variety. Perhaps some better syncing to the music would have worked out.

[Run Laddie Run]

(title in work)

Quite well done! The comments you wrote go well with this, as it definitely makes the ending pretty unexpected. I definitely didn't see that coming and it made me laugh. The graphics were very impressive. Rarely do we see running animated as well as you have done. Great short!

[Billy Mays: God of War]

(title in work)

Heh, an interesting tribute definitely, and the floppy penis at the end definitely did it for me to give this a ten. It was kind of hard to follow, but the animations were at least interesting and unique. Definitely a unique tribute compared to some, which were very simple and generic.

[Wse011 Peanutbutterjelly!]

(title in work)

One fad I never got was peanut butter jelly time, and it's stuff like this that leaves me in the dark as to why this is a fad. Not only was the animation bad...I can vote high on a good loop, but the music looped as well, so it just kept layering and layering, making just incomprehensible noise after ten seconds of watching. The only redeeming quality would be the icon you chose.

[Ecto The Dark Light]

(title in work)

Not bad at all! The story in the beginning was really well written, and it did a good job of getting me interested in the storyline. The music you added in this was really good as well. Of course, the part that needs most improving here is the graphics. Improve your drawings and animations, which I'm sure you will over time, and I think you could be quite popular.