FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Mature Pear]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music, though I wanted to listen to the whole thing. The storyline wasn't bad, kind of humorous. The graphics were also pretty well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I was expecting this to either be sad or funny, and you took the funny route, which didn't turn out so well. You should have added more to get the characters some more personality. This is just boring the way you have it now.

[Clean your Room]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. The drawings weren't the best, but they served their purpose and were better than anything I can draw. I liked the song you picked as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The song was good, but I couldn't hear the voice overs very well. I'm pretty sure I missed a bit of the storyline because of this, and I definitely missed what was said at the ending. You should really consider revising this.

[The Happy Little Buterfly]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this movie were very well done. I really like to give extra points when animations are synced to music, and you did this flawlessly, which I really liked. You really did a good job on this by setting the calm relaxing mood and then ending it quickly with the splattering on the windshield. Pretty neat job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really care that it is short, but I'm sure you will get criticism from other people regarding the length of this movie.

InsidiousTweevle responds:

Yeah, people have complained, but I DID warn them. Incidentally, I'm glad people understand that it's a windshield. A lot of other people I showed it to didn't get it. Thanks.

[Skydiving]

K

^^Good Points^^
A well done movie, no doubt. Though the coloring looked a little unprofessional, the animations were above average. You did a lot of small animations and they were pretty life-like too. I had to laugh at the "NOOOO" towards the end of this, that was pretty funny. Overall, the sound effects were great in this and well placed.

^^Needs Improving^^
You said coming soon, but I don't get it. I thought this movie pretty much wrapped things up quite nicely. What else could you add to this?

[Teh Gamerz Theme]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had some good humor in it; this made me smile, but nothing too great.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't very well presented. Your animations are not very realistic since they are so slow. Make everything quicker. Your drawings aren't that great either. Try to add more shading and use less gradients throughout your next movie. Also some sound effects couldn't hurt.

[Not Your Ice Cream]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty funny movie, not bad for your first. I liked the voice overs you used and the sound effects were well found too. The storyline was humorous, nice job on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are obviously the weak point in this movie. You drew a lot of things very two dimensionally without any shading. Also, a lot of this just stood still the whole time. You need to add some more animations in your next movie to make it more interesting.

[A very DOCKY Halloween]

K

^^Good Points^^
There were some good images in this episode. I like how you drew SBC and some of the other clocks, as well as HLG.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really hard to understand. In fact, I'm sure I only got the bare minimum in order to understand what was going on. I couldn't hear half of the speakonia, and there was too much going on at one time. Also, music with lyrics don't work, it's just distracting. Then towards the end that stupid screaming noise just kept playing over and over. I couldn't wait for this to be over.

IZSBHR responds:

it was quality sound or animation, or not on time.

I chose to do better animation instead of sound :)

[AbyssWars]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very well done. The sound effects had to be the best part since they were very exaggerated and very dramatic. They added a lot to this movie. The song wasn't bad either, SOAD has to be one of the best bands. The graphics were great of course too. The drawings were unique, I liked your characters and the animations were very realistic. I liked the camera angles too, they were always changing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps some kind of backstory would make this a lot better.

[Robotech Sentinels Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very good in this movie. It was a unique style since you didn't really do anything in Flash, but just imported images in, but it was a very clean job. The animations were keen, and the sound effects were top notch and very unique. This has a very unique storyline too, and I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
While the graphics were good, I would rather have everything done in Flash...it's kind of cheating what you did. The only other complaint I have is the subtitles. They go by way too fast and I had trouble reading a few of them. That's something you may want to improve upon.