FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[its all been done]

K

^^Good Points^^
Excellent animations. You used a lot of simple techniques and still made this look professionally made. The music was good too, has to be one of the best bands every to exist. The characters were pretty cute too. You should make a full movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was mad that you cut off at the best part of the song "If i put my finger here...". And just the fact that this ends where it does is really quite lame. Also, you could have at least edited this and gotten rid of the crosses on the faces.

[BlobCombat.II-Payback]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is definitely better than the first episode. This episode you actually got into the storyline that you are developing for this series a little more. The sound effects were better and the animations were a little smoother. You've improved a bit since we last met.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, I don't really like how you ended this episode, but still I wouldn't mind watching the next episode either.

Review Request Club

[NGC Toon #2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ah, another NGC movie, what a pleasant surprise for this day. I have to say that every part of this collab was enjoyable, and I'm glad that you threw in a game into the mix as well, that is something that I don't see often in collabs. My favorite had to be swif's just for randomness and good graphics. Followed by Big ex, which was very ironic and had unique graphics.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say I really enjoyed Yodd's part since it was just his halloween submission. I would expect such a high profile site and group to be making completely original stuff for a collab.

NGCTOONS responds:

:( you dislike my part. Thanks for the review.

[The Mature Pear]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music, though I wanted to listen to the whole thing. The storyline wasn't bad, kind of humorous. The graphics were also pretty well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I was expecting this to either be sad or funny, and you took the funny route, which didn't turn out so well. You should have added more to get the characters some more personality. This is just boring the way you have it now.

[Clean your Room]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. The drawings weren't the best, but they served their purpose and were better than anything I can draw. I liked the song you picked as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The song was good, but I couldn't hear the voice overs very well. I'm pretty sure I missed a bit of the storyline because of this, and I definitely missed what was said at the ending. You should really consider revising this.

[The Happy Little Buterfly]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this movie were very well done. I really like to give extra points when animations are synced to music, and you did this flawlessly, which I really liked. You really did a good job on this by setting the calm relaxing mood and then ending it quickly with the splattering on the windshield. Pretty neat job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really care that it is short, but I'm sure you will get criticism from other people regarding the length of this movie.

InsidiousTweevle responds:

Yeah, people have complained, but I DID warn them. Incidentally, I'm glad people understand that it's a windshield. A lot of other people I showed it to didn't get it. Thanks.

[Skydiving]

K

^^Good Points^^
A well done movie, no doubt. Though the coloring looked a little unprofessional, the animations were above average. You did a lot of small animations and they were pretty life-like too. I had to laugh at the "NOOOO" towards the end of this, that was pretty funny. Overall, the sound effects were great in this and well placed.

^^Needs Improving^^
You said coming soon, but I don't get it. I thought this movie pretty much wrapped things up quite nicely. What else could you add to this?

[Teh Gamerz Theme]

K

^^Good Points^^
This had some good humor in it; this made me smile, but nothing too great.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't very well presented. Your animations are not very realistic since they are so slow. Make everything quicker. Your drawings aren't that great either. Try to add more shading and use less gradients throughout your next movie. Also some sound effects couldn't hurt.

[Not Your Ice Cream]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty funny movie, not bad for your first. I liked the voice overs you used and the sound effects were well found too. The storyline was humorous, nice job on this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are obviously the weak point in this movie. You drew a lot of things very two dimensionally without any shading. Also, a lot of this just stood still the whole time. You need to add some more animations in your next movie to make it more interesting.