FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Textual Adventures]

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting concept to use words as characters to your movie. I thought the yu-gi-oh duel was a pretty funny idea too.

^^Needs Improving^^
A good idea, but poorly executed. The sound effects seemed really odd to put in, and you didn't use many sound effects where you could have. Something needs to be done in the beginning to make it more interesting. Music or sound effects or something.

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Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks!

.frenZy.

[Clockfriend Purge]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie. The drawings were very cool, looked hand drawn in fact. The storyline was pretty funny, I had to laugh at the clock screaming down the street, and the ending was cool. What did you use to make the voice over? It sounded really weird.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects in the beginning make this sound like it was just made to annoy people, and I think that is why this has such a low score. Try not to use such obnoxious sound effects.

[Chris and EJ - Wii]

K

^^Good Points^^
The art wasn't bad, but that was about the only thing in this movie. It's kind of humorous, but it could be better.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really like to know what is going on when I watch a movie, but you started this right in the middle of something that could have led from a good storyline prior to it. Next time you submit something, make it more than one frame with a few MC's and then people will like it more.

[OWNT]

K

^^Good Points^^
No doubt you've got some animation skill. This animation is really quite keen and was professionally done. I liked how you moved the camera around to give that chaotic feel, and the ending was pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
You don't give a man four arms and then end the movie, that's just not right. You also didn't do much for the backgrounds. I like to see fancy backgrounds in movies and this was just plain gray.

[VBNM]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it was mildly funny, the randomness. The music was good too. I like inspector gadget remixes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's a single frame then just a few MC's that are at most ten frames a piece. I can't say I think you put much effort into making this, and it really wasn't entertaining at all to me.

Carbonwater responds:

I put like five minutes of work into this and it survived.
Lol, internet.

[The Cat Game]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty funny clip. I never saw the movie, but still the clip sounded pretty funny and it was good quality. You used the right sprites at the right time too, which was great and you changed characters a lot.

^^Needs Improving^^
When you animated you could see the previous sprite at the same time, so it looked like there were two hands/heads or whatever you were moving around. This just made this look a little unprofessional. Also, it would be better if this were longer, since usually PW stuff is more than one clip.

[My Moustache is Bleeding!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the drawing of the guy with the mustache was pretty funny against a real life picture. LOL, ROFL, and LMAO were pretty funny parts too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, not a very interesting movie. I didn't like the voice overs, they really turned me off from liking this movie. The blood looked really stupid and it doesn't look like you put a whole bunch of time into this.