FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lumus's Paddle Ball Exp.]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics, they were the best part about this. Good shading and good detail. Also good camera effects and realistic effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Flashy graphics, but that seems to be about it with this movie. The storyline was decent at best. Nothing really happened and I'm surprised you didn't just continue with this in this episode instead of waiting to continue it. Since nothing really happened in this episode, I really don't feel like waiting around for the next episode.

[The Ultimate Rumble]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hey, this is not nearly as bad as the score might lead one to think! The lyrics were pretty creative and followed the original song well, just from that it is obvious that you spent a lot of time on this. The graphics were good too. Very nice drawings and pretty good animations. honestly not a whole lot worse than the Ultimate Showdown. Very funny!

^^Needs Improving^^
There is an obvious staticky noise in this throughout, mainly when you sing. It is really annoying in the beginning too.

[Bean Adventure]

K

^^Good Points^^
An excellent movie! I really loved the sound effects that you used, like the screaming and such. The graphics were very well done. Great use of the fade effect. The storyline was really funny too. You definitely have a creative imagination to take the human body and turn it into such a funny little movie about a funny little bean. Excellent job.

^^Needs Improving^^
What does this do? Loop at some point? I've never seen a movie do that. If not you should not have repeated everything.

ShotgunFacelift responds:

thanks! i wanted it to loop cause i thought it would be a funny way to show that the bean has to make the journey over and over again. plus its even funnier to see him eat a shitty bean.

[Textual Adventures]

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting concept to use words as characters to your movie. I thought the yu-gi-oh duel was a pretty funny idea too.

^^Needs Improving^^
A good idea, but poorly executed. The sound effects seemed really odd to put in, and you didn't use many sound effects where you could have. Something needs to be done in the beginning to make it more interesting. Music or sound effects or something.

Review Request Club :)

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks!

.frenZy.

[Clockfriend Purge]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie. The drawings were very cool, looked hand drawn in fact. The storyline was pretty funny, I had to laugh at the clock screaming down the street, and the ending was cool. What did you use to make the voice over? It sounded really weird.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects in the beginning make this sound like it was just made to annoy people, and I think that is why this has such a low score. Try not to use such obnoxious sound effects.