FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chocolate Person's Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
At least you tried to animated this a little bit and the animations did somewhat follow what he was saying. The subtitles were necessary too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The framerate is obviously set quite low in this movie, making the animations look very obvious. I really could easily tell when a frame ended and started. There really weren't any drawings other than the line for the ground and the guy himself, and the shape tween at the end was completely stupid looking.

[Meow Meow]

K

^^Good Points^^
Low filesize. Also somewhat funny just for the fact that you were able to get it to pass judgment.

^^Needs Improving^^
You guaranteed my dancing cats, yet all I got from this was a stationary picture of a cat standing up. I saw no attempt to make him dance, in either animation or video form. Also, the image was resized poorly and was squished vertically :(

[Noir Town]

K

^^Good Points^^
Graphics were the best part in this. your drawings were pretty neat looking and I can tell you put some time into them and know what you are doing with the graphics. I liked how this was somewhat synced to the music, which was a good song.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't that exciting. You used a bunch of the same animations and scenes over and over again, which got boring pretty quick. Next time try to make new scenes, make the current ones shorter, and good stuff.

[Lumus's Paddle Ball Exp.]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good graphics, they were the best part about this. Good shading and good detail. Also good camera effects and realistic effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Flashy graphics, but that seems to be about it with this movie. The storyline was decent at best. Nothing really happened and I'm surprised you didn't just continue with this in this episode instead of waiting to continue it. Since nothing really happened in this episode, I really don't feel like waiting around for the next episode.

[The Ultimate Rumble]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hey, this is not nearly as bad as the score might lead one to think! The lyrics were pretty creative and followed the original song well, just from that it is obvious that you spent a lot of time on this. The graphics were good too. Very nice drawings and pretty good animations. honestly not a whole lot worse than the Ultimate Showdown. Very funny!

^^Needs Improving^^
There is an obvious staticky noise in this throughout, mainly when you sing. It is really annoying in the beginning too.

[Bean Adventure]

K

^^Good Points^^
An excellent movie! I really loved the sound effects that you used, like the screaming and such. The graphics were very well done. Great use of the fade effect. The storyline was really funny too. You definitely have a creative imagination to take the human body and turn it into such a funny little movie about a funny little bean. Excellent job.

^^Needs Improving^^
What does this do? Loop at some point? I've never seen a movie do that. If not you should not have repeated everything.

ShotgunFacelift responds:

thanks! i wanted it to loop cause i thought it would be a funny way to show that the bean has to make the journey over and over again. plus its even funnier to see him eat a shitty bean.