FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Riggs Caper]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok....The graphics looked kind of funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie made absolutely no sense. The people just started arguing about "combos" which I have no idea what they are talking about. Then some guy comes in and they all start yelling fuck and what not. Basically this made no sense no matter how hard I concentrated and tried to get to figure out what the heck was going on. You had no sound and the graphics were extremely crude.

[Zumbie]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this were pretty good. You had a lot of small background animations throughout this, which always adds a lot to a movie, also the main animations were well done. The drawings weren't too bad either. I liked the music, it fit well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, you never continued the series, so your guarantee of storyline is left to sit on this movie, which has really none and is just left at a cliffhanger. The drawings in the beginning are a lot weaker than those closer to the end too, which is odd.

[one fine day]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty funny movie. The way that the old man beat the other guy down to hell was pretty creative, and the music at the end was pretty humorous too, even though that part made no sense at all.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animations weren't that good. For example, when the robber gets hit with the car you just rotate him and move him upward, which looked pretty odd. As I already said, the ending made no sense, so I was disappointed at that.

[Victorian Fashion]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is better than most movies relative to the score it has. I really found it funny how you dramatized the guy getting dressed and made that scene the most intense. I really wasn't expecting that the guy would miss the game, and the end was pretty humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really do any shading, which makes the graphics look pretty crude. That is really the only part that I would say you really need to improve upon.

[The RIAA]

K

^^Good Points^^
A mildly entertaining movie. The methods of prevention and how you explained them was the funniest part about this. I liked part three the best, which was funny when the black screen came up.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't that good. I didn't like your style of drawing and you hardly had any animation in this at all. I'm sure some people could easily get bored by this, which is why you need to add more animations in the prevention part of this.

[Mini Attack Dog : Romeo]

K

^^Good Points^^
At least the video quality was pretty good as well as the sound quality from the video.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think the last review summed it up quite well with "?". This really made no sense. It's just a dog jumping around and barking at the camera. Not that it is a terrible video, but it is not Flash work at all. You didn't edit the video at all or do anything in Flash besides import the video then export the SWF.

[The Go4rz]

K

^^Good Points^^
Neat name for the band...I would not have thought it was about gophers. The animutation wasn't quite as bad as most stuff people try to make like this and the animations were sort of synced with the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Would have been better if you had put some more time into this rather than just using the same tired animations over and over. You picked a somewhat energetic song, so you should have transfered that energy over to the gophers going crazy!

[Computer Art Geek]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very good graphics. You shaded everything in a unique way, but it still looked good, and your drawings were life like. The ending was kind of funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you should have added sound effects or at least some voice overs to help you out. Without any sound at all movies are just really boring. This would have done better as a comic strip or something.

[gun min Fight]

K

^^Good Points^^
This wasn't too bad. Some of the fighting was pretty creative, especially at the end with the motorcycle smash.

^^Needs Improving^^
You have so much going on here, which leads to such a great opportunity for you to have great sound effects, but you completely ignored this, which was a bad move on your part. The animations were pretty crude; half of the time punches didn't even reach the targets, and the graphics were primitive too. Really no good coloring or background drawings.

[Afrobot]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie at all. The drawings were pretty good, well shaded. The storyline was pretty funny too. I had to laugh when the guy got defeated by that one little bolt. The moral of the story was a funny addition too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations really hurt this the most. You animations were very crude. The voice overs weren't that convincing either. If you are going to yell, don't do that whisper thing...actually do a yell!