FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rotting Brains]

K

^^Good Points^^
I don't know man, maybe you have something about your name, but I think anything you make could pass! The music was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not to be mean, but this wasn't that great. The animations were pretty bad, you just rotated and tweened...you didn't even move the arms or legs. This wasn't original either, there are a ton of stick figure obstacles course type things on NG.

Frenzy responds:

Thanks for the comments; this was my first actual half-decent 'movie' submitted to NG...

Also, I tested that, 'anything I make could pass' theory... for the most part, it's not true. :(

Thanks again!

.frenZy.

[Yellow Mustard]

K

^^Good Points^^
I can't believe you found such an odd song in the audio portal. It's really quite interesting and a great choice to make a Flash movie on.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animating and drawing skills obviously aren't that good, so I felt you didn't do the song much good. The drawings were really plain with no shading or definition at all. I felt a better animator could have really captured the emotion at the end of the song, which you really did not do too well.

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks!

[Earth vs Funk]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good to see that an animutation actually won an award, that doesn't happen often, but this movie deserves it. The music was great, and your translation was pretty funny to read. I like how you made the images go along with the music and the lyrics too, that is always neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
The music needed to be more crazy. The music is a pivotal part of an animutation, but this music was just average.

[WWW(animutation)]

K

^^Good Points^^
Animutation has always been something I've enjoyed quite a bit in the Flash community, and this one was a good movie. The music was crazy as all animutation music needs to be. There was lots of funny scenes in this, but my favorite has to go to the baseball fight scene with intermittent Oprah.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not the best animutation mainly because the images weren't cropped to well so there was a lot of whiteness around the edges.

WirelessTaco responds:

Thanks for the review,
Yea I think i did slack off on the cropping I will keep that in mind if I make another.

[Gold!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely one of the better Clock Day movies right here. The storyline is very cool because it takes an abstract concept of becoming a clock and putting it into a Flash movie in a strange way that most people have never imagined. The storyline was wonderful, I especially like how you added lots of stuff that didn't really compliment the storyline, like Clock Trek. Also, the way you used real voices and speakonia was cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
This went a little bit slow for my likings. It was a long movie, I just feel that it could have been shorter and still had the same effect.

[Strawberry Flav'd Webcam!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, I thought this movie was pretty darn funny. I first laughed when SBC asked for A/F/L. That was pretty funny, as well as when his mother came in. It is weird how no one ever has SBC's family in a movie. Nice job on making a funny storyline, even though you said you rushed it. I also loved the speakonia tone.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics aren't really that good. You could have used some more outlines for you drawings to make it look better. Also, use normal clock faces.

RSQViper responds:

FOr the graphics, I was trying it without an outline for the first time to see how it looked. I could have done some shading loking back.

As for normal clock faces, I have no idea what you're saying. LOL! I thought they were clock faces.

Thanks for reviewing!

[ZIMMY puppet pals ep. 3]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty good. Was it from the show? Also, the backgrounds you used weren't that bad, and the rain scene was pretty well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really pretty boring. The animations were really slow and the storyline moved very slow and was really hard to follow, since the animations were mostly just resizing images and tweens. Overall this was really just a boring movie.

Review Request Club.

IZSBHR responds:

Resizing images and tweens? Woah, woah, woah. This was 85.7% fbf, and it WAS 86% until I accidently replaced an fbf with a tween :(

Music = From show
BGs = official art pic from show :)
Rain = All mine :D

Thanks :)

[mario mishaps]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, maybe it is a little immature, but I liked the humor in this. It was pretty random how King Wart wanted Mario to stick things in himself for fun. Great fun there, also the end joke was just as funny. Great stuff...I guess.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were terrible. I have no idea what you did with the sprites but they were all low quality and blurry around the edges. Also, animations were very primitive.

[The Riggs Caper]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok....The graphics looked kind of funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie made absolutely no sense. The people just started arguing about "combos" which I have no idea what they are talking about. Then some guy comes in and they all start yelling fuck and what not. Basically this made no sense no matter how hard I concentrated and tried to get to figure out what the heck was going on. You had no sound and the graphics were extremely crude.

[Zumbie]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics in this were pretty good. You had a lot of small background animations throughout this, which always adds a lot to a movie, also the main animations were well done. The drawings weren't too bad either. I liked the music, it fit well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, you never continued the series, so your guarantee of storyline is left to sit on this movie, which has really none and is just left at a cliffhanger. The drawings in the beginning are a lot weaker than those closer to the end too, which is odd.