FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[_Clock vs Madness War_]

Bad.

^^Good Points^^
Not the worst idea I've seen for a movie, but this was just poorly executed. The alternate endings was a nice touch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty bad. The drawings were really unprofessional, and the animations were a little weird at some parts, however some parts looked decent. The music was a terrible choice and there were hardly any sound effects. The alternate endings were annoying because they just looped, and this was very poorly put togethter.

[***BRUCEWILLISISONFIRE***]

Yeah...

^^Good Points^^
There wasn't much that was good about this. The only thing I liked was the Benny Hill music, that always makes anything seem better.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this is pretty bad. It's just some crappy rotating at a high framerate that looks seizurific! I didn't find this funny at all or entertaining in the least bit. And the seizure warning took way too long and even that wasn't worth the wait to see this crap!

[A Robot Killed His Family]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
The animations are very smooth and look quite nice and pretty realistic. I was really impressed how you animated the man flipping. The sound effects were well-placed, and the music was a good pace for the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The title doesn't leave much for the imagination...Also this is a little boring since there isn't any background and very little color. Add some coloring and some simple background items and this will look a lot better.

mrwesticles responds:

All elements that I'm looking forward to adding to the next one. Thanks for the valuable input and I agree completely.

[refurbished]

Very cool!

^^Good Points^^
In my opinion, this is the best movie you've made to date. The storyline was really cool, it's a very original idea for a life store. The ending was sad, but I think it teaches a valuable lesson. The song was also an excellent choice, since it changed tone and mood at the exact right time.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings were very sloppy. I really couldn't make out the drawings in the first scene. This could use lots of revamping in graphics, mainly drawings.

[friend factory]

Good concept

^^Good Points^^
Like your other movies, the ideas are great, however there are other major flaws. I liked the storyline in this movie and the play on words at the end was a cute touch. The music was a good choice as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Take out the part at the end with the batteries. It just ruins the mood and isn't really funny at all. This could use a graphical revamp as well. at least some color would be nice.

[loved.]

Shoddy animations...

^^Good Points^^
The storyline was pretty funny. I wasn't expecting that ending to pop up. The end was pretty cute and I thought this was a good try for a good flash movie. The music also went perfectly with what was going on.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are just plain poor. The drawings don't look very realistic and aren't uniform at all. The animations were also pretty poor, like the talking. If you improve this I'm sure this movie would have a lot better score.

[Truth about bbqbefbrgrman]

I don't want to know anyway

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in the beginning, it was pretty funky! I also thought that the sound clip at the end was mildly funny. I like how you led the users on and then gave them that ending.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I'm not sure how many people care to know the truth, I sure don't, so I wasn't disappointed when you would tell me. The drawings were pretty poor and looked very unprofessional.

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Yeah well you have to understand that drawings were made in hmm...10 seconds? With ms paint so yeah

[zZz Moscow Beijing]

What the hell?

^^Good Points^^
The song was the best part of this. Remember that I HATED THE SONG.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't get this? I'm usually a fan of the CC, but this is just weird. What the hell does this promote or stand for? This took very little talent, it's made up of some low quality pictures and some scrolling text. I don't get it.

Kenzu responds:

these pictures aren't low quality and cannot become better at this size. I would have to make them bigger and then, you wouldn't be able to see the lyrics.