FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico's school : Dark side]

K

^^Good Points^^
A neat little sequence of events you have here. The graphics were pretty good. Interesting to watch and to watch the events that unfold. I found this entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
The big thing is the sound in this. The music in parts sounded really grainy and low quality. Also, the empty parts when people were talking were really just awkward.

[FlashBack 00]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a deserving movie of one of the top spots on NG, even if only for a short while. The graphics were incredibly smooth and incredibly skilled. Animations were extremely life like, as was the drawings, which were incredibly detailed. Extremely realistic blood and gore. I really liked how everything was NG theme, even the people in the crowds with level icons as hands and such. The flashback scenes were amazing, and were very powerful with the sound effects in them.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really nothing can be said to improve this.

[Mario In Newgrounds III]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely a lot better than any of the previous episodes. Your skills in graphics have increased by a whole lot, with lots more effects and a great new layout for the whole thing. The voice overs were cool and the storyline made more sense in this episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
Again, sound could be compressed a bit to reduce size, and also some grammar issues. Other than that this looks pretty good.

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[Mario in Newgrounds II]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some interesting zooming effects in this. This was a solid submission and a decent addition to the series.

^^Needs Improving^^
This didn't really make a whole lot of sense to me. There is a lot to be answered in the next episode. I am interested in the link between the sprite world and the windows world. Also, what the heck is up with Luigi? He just randomly attacks Toad.

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[Mario In Newgrounds]

K

^^Good Points^^
Good to see you gave another go at creating a similar series to your last. The music was good throughout, and the storyline is unique having this kingdom attacked by a computer cursor. Looking forward to seeing some more.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the music must be compressed. File size way too big. Next, I'm not seeing the whole link between the mushroom kingdom and the computer. Can the cursor just go wherever, but Mario is caught?

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[Pico Idol]

K

^^Good Points^^
Parts of this were pretty funny. I liked Stamper's song that he sung and also the judges were pretty funny to watch. The graphics were the best part. Good drawings and shading as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly I wasn't too impressed by it. Mainly because of the level of humor in this. I was expecting a lot more and found myself pretty bored throughout most of this.

Rudy responds:

Thank you for your review. I'm sorry that you got bored of this animation :(

[Pico: Ready for Anything]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty interesting movie. I liked the introduction to it, the graphics looked very clean and unique in this part. I have to say that the ending was kind of cool as well, and a little unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too much of this was just introduction text however. You could have sped that along a little bit or made the actual animated movie part of it longer.

[Chill Pico day 07]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good piece of artwork you have here. The sketch of Pico is very cool looking and the background effects went well with this too, and look high tech. A cool tribute image.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, its really just an image, with very little animation at all. A good tribute, but nothing too entertaining.

[Pico:What have I done]

K

^^Good Points^^
You have a keen style of drawing and animation. A very unique design of Pico and a very unique storyline. It was interesting to watch this, with the powerful music. Very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this seemed like just sketches or storyboard. Looked unfinished with little background detail.

paddy-ryan responds:

On the Improvements,
My next flash (for Clockday)has allready being completly story-borded unlike all my flash upto this point and is going well so the problems should be fix.

thanks for the review

[The Powerpuff Pico Crew]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really a funny spoof of Powderpuff girls. I like how you designed this to be similar to the real show, even with the crappy drawings of them flying. Jesus was a hilarious addition to this, and the drawings were humorous throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
When you were introducing the characters the sound quality was a little off and staticy.

AdamJack responds:

Now that I've got a better microphone, there will never be a bad recording from me ever again. Thanks. :)