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[Pico:What have I done]

K

^^Good Points^^
You have a keen style of drawing and animation. A very unique design of Pico and a very unique storyline. It was interesting to watch this, with the powerful music. Very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some parts of this seemed like just sketches or storyboard. Looked unfinished with little background detail.

paddy-ryan responds:

On the Improvements,
My next flash (for Clockday)has allready being completly story-borded unlike all my flash upto this point and is going well so the problems should be fix.

thanks for the review

[The Powerpuff Pico Crew]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really a funny spoof of Powderpuff girls. I like how you designed this to be similar to the real show, even with the crappy drawings of them flying. Jesus was a hilarious addition to this, and the drawings were humorous throughout.

^^Needs Improving^^
When you were introducing the characters the sound quality was a little off and staticy.

AdamJack responds:

Now that I've got a better microphone, there will never be a bad recording from me ever again. Thanks. :)

[Pico's "What the fuck!?"]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was really good. The graphics were great. Lots of shading and three dimensional animations were always cool. The random events were all unexpected and rather funny at times. Like when Pico ran into the hydrant instead of being crushed by the safe. Anyway, Tom eating his baby was pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like how you said that you weren't finished. This made no sense anyway, you could have just as easily integrated Tom into the end without anyone noticing you didn't finish.

Entrails responds:

Yeah. That whole "I ran out of time" was a bit stupid, but I was just so disappointed at the flash. That it was so short and that not so much stuff happened in it.

[Picoday 2007]

K

^^Good Points^^
For only doing the very beginning of the song this wasn't bad. You did a good job on the graphics, which went along with the music and were pretty detailed. Nice job on the intro as well, before the lyrics.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't really great, as it only covered about twenty seconds of the song, which disappointed me to say the least.

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review! Yeah, it has quite a few flaws, I never had time to really finish it.

[Frank Dude Ep.1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how you constructed this. The perspective of it was rather nice, with one person telling the story...most movies don't have a narrator. The graphics were fairly clean, and I liked the ending to this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not much in here graphically. You only added what was completely necessary to get the movie by. Really no backgrounds or anything to enhance this. Also, the voice overs were a little muffled in spots and hard to hear.

PeteZahut responds:

ya I will add a background in ep.6, and I'm trying to get my voices to sound better.

[A very DOCKY Pico Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was kind of funny how everyone keeps pronouncing Pico's name wrong. Nice preloader change and some cool graphics in this way.

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole joke of mispronouncing Pico has been a large theme this year, but you could have come up with something a lot more interesting in my opinion. The movie didn't have much to back it up other than this, which was disappointing.

IZSBHR responds:

- Ahaha, I wonder myself sometimes (:
- If only there were truly a Pico dock.
- Thanks.
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- Hm, it has? I mean, I've seen it in one or two others, but I had already submitted this at that point ^^;
- If only my original idea didn't explode in the hanger. Forget taking off.

[The BEST Pico Collab Ever]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too shabby, nice to see a collab by some old guys. I liked the menu for this, looked nice. Zekey's part was pretty funny, as was Tremclad's. A few of these gave me a laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing really stuck out as being great about this collab, and each part had its own downfalls, mostly in simplicity and just evasion of the topic of Pico.

[Pico's mission]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, it had Nirvana music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was all kinds of wrong. The graphics were terrible. Your Pico drawing looked nothing like him, and the general graphics lacked detail. Half of this movie was just Pico flying through the air, which bored the hell out of me. Part two was just all kinds of awful...not even going into that part.

[Mario In Windows III]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, well I liked the music and sound effects, as you have done a good job with them throughout the series. I thought the flashback scene was pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, this didn't make much sense. Why the heck did Luigi just suddenly realize he was dieing? He seemed to fight the cursor flawlessly. Also, many spelling errors were in this.

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