FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario In Windows II]

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely better than the first episode of the series. You did a lot better job on making more interesting animations and more action throughout. The sound effects and music were good, and you had some V-Cam effects, which was nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
Looks like the framerate could definitely be increased. In the beginning when Luigi is training you can really see the shells just jump from one spot to another. Therefore, you need an increased framerate with more frames in between.

Review Request Club

[[KC] PicoBJ Time]

K

^^Good Points^^
Honestly with this the KC looks better than most crappily named groups. Anyway, this movie wasn't too bad. The dancing Pico looked pretty funny and the stuff that Italian Key said were kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm a little disappointed that there wasn't any music in this movie. I was expecting some fancy remix of the original song that this is a spoof of, but alas.

Smiley-Bob responds:

Thank you very much.
Okay well I havenofuckin clue how to edit music. But if I could I would've so done IT'S PICO BUTTER JELLY TIME!
that woulda rocked my socks off.
Lol.
You should join the KC!
WE could use a cool person like you...actually we could use anybody...lolz.

[Mario In Windows]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad idea for a movie. It's a much better take on the lame animator vs. animation knock offs. I really liked the music and creative usage of sound effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can tell you are pretty new to animating, as you spend a lot of time on animations that aren't particularly interesting or impressive, like the general movement of Mario. You need to be more to the point in these simple animations, and add some more detailed stuff as well.

Review Request Club

[AA- Pico day]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics you had were pretty nice. Good definition in your characters and also some nice shading effects in here. The sound quality was high, and the Mexican party at the end was rather unexpected and comical.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really the most interesting storyline. It doesn't seem like you put a whole lot of imagination into making the script. Really the only part that wasn't completely boring was the end.

JackflashProductions responds:

Stop reviewing movies so much.

[My Name Sucks]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a lot longer than I had expected, which was a good thing. I have to say that this was a pretty funny movie, and the best part had to be the few minutes of wrong guesses, and also picking the Pico Clock design. Good job on the graphics and sounds as always.

^^Needs Improving^^
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KKyuubi responds:

...pikey? piake? pian? pocoyo?

[Pico VS Pico]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very fun and very unexpected. I thought it was very funny when Pico picked up that bandai-esque children's game and actually seemed pretty entertained by it. It was neat how you completely changed from an intense mood right to a calm and comfortable mood. Really great movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a fight between Pico's and was first a little confused at the ending. Nonetheless a great submission.

[Piconian Slaughter]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good Pico Day submission. I really like the idea of Pico being in a deathmatch with a bunch of apes...definitely something I didn't see coming. Anyway, overall a fair job on the graphics, and very nice choice of music throughout. I also really liked the part when Pico healed his wounds and became superhuman. Badass.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it's pretty obvious that the animations at the end of the movie varied greatly in quality with those at the beginning. Much less quality and the whole "Too violent" screen was kind of cheap.

Vincoid responds:

Thanks for the review :)

I know the last scene is kind of cheap but that's because I didn't have time to finish it the way I wanted.

Again, thanks ;)

[Pico gets a boner]

K

^^Good Points^^
For making this last night, this wasn't bad at all. The graphics were a unique style, I liked the shaking motion of it all. The "I killed the sun" joke made me laugh, that was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The shaking was cool, but it kind of hurt my eyes :o Also, the storyline does show that this took one day to make.

essal responds:

yeah i also found the shaking to be a bit too much, but it turned out im not that much of a tracer :P

[Pico´s Birthday 2007]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well...it's pico day. So happy Pico Day!

^^Needs Improving^^
There is a lot that could be said here. The worst part about this is the graphics. Your animations are extremely low quality and not very realistic at all. The storyline didn't make sense, seems like no one actually forgot his birthday, and why would they anyway? The evil guy had nothing to do with the storyline, and the voice acting was just terrible.